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We have been playing last 1 and half month with our internal team. Hope every one conscious about their own strength and weekness. Now we are entering to next stage of our strategy.
So I expect your 100% commitment in to our upcoming tournament which is going to start on Mar 01 to April 18. The more details about the tournament will send you shortly.

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[+3] - Jack of Hearts - 02/15/2014[quote="achu"] We have been playing last 1 and half month with our internal team. [b][color=#FF0000]For the past month and a half, we have been playing our internal team.[/color][/b]...

@achu,

DAVID wrote:

We have been playing with our internal team now for a month and a half.
I hope that every one is conscious of his or her own strengths and weaknesses.
Now we are entering the next stage of our strategy,
so I expect your 100% commitment to our upcoming tournament
which will start on March 1, lasting to April 18.
I 'll send you more details about the tournament shortly,
when they become available.

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@OmSigDAVID,

Sloppy, David - as usual.

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@achu,

achu wrote:

We have been playing last 1 and half month with our internal team.
For the past month and a half, we have been playing our internal team.
Hope every one conscious about their own strength and weaknesses.
Let's hope every one of us are conscious of our own strengths and weaknesses.
Now we are entering to next stage of our strategy.
Now, we are entering the next stage of our strategy.
So I expect your 100% commitment in to our upcoming tournament which is going to start on Mar 01 to April 18.
Therefore, I expect a 100% commitment from each of you in our upcoming tournament, starting March 1st thru April 18th.
The more details about the tournament will send you shortly.
Soon, more details concerning the tournament will be sent to you.

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@OmSigDAVID,

Thank you very much

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@achu,

Quote:

We have been playing last 1 and half month with our internal team. Hope every one conscious about their own strength and weekness. Now we are entering to next stage of our strategy.
So I expect your 100% commitment in to our upcoming tournament which is going to start on Mar 01 to April 18. The more details about the tournament will send you shortly.

After reading this I was thinking what is the challenge and how did I miss it. And then I thought I'll be looking forward to this.

But then I was like, oh. And re read the title to this thread.

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@anonymously99,

I am definitely a dumbass. Or am I missing something. As usual.

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@achu,

To be corrected? You are missing details. Wink

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@Jack of Hearts,

Jack of Hearts wrote:

achu wrote:

We have been playing last 1 and half month with our internal team.
For the past month and a half, we have been playing our internal team.
Hope every one conscious about their own strength and weaknesses.
Let's hope every one of us are conscious of our own strengths and weaknesses.
Now we are entering to next stage of our strategy.
Now, we are entering the next stage of our strategy.
So I expect your 100% commitment in to our upcoming tournament which is going to start on Mar 01 to April 18.
Therefore, I expect a 100% commitment from each of you in our upcoming tournament, starting March 1st thru April 18th.
The more details about the tournament will send you shortly.
Soon, more details concerning the tournament will be sent to you.

Jack, u said: "one of us are".
Note that it does not start continually until it is over.

David

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