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Could someone phrase the sentences in a way a native speaker would write?

 
 
Reply Wed 31 Jul, 2013 02:28 pm
I am very lucky. I got into an accident and came out alive. I still have my legs to walk and to move around. My leg was not amputated. I am very blessed.

I doubt the above sentences are natural. Could someone phrase them in a way a native speaker would write?

Thanks.
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Reply Wed 31 Jul, 2013 02:39 pm
@tanguatlay,
I am very lucky. I got into an accident and came out alive. I still have my legs to walk on and to move around with. My leg was not amputated. I am very blessed.

Your original sentences are quite natural. I'm only offering minor possibilities, not corrections.
dalehileman
 
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Reply Wed 31 Jul, 2013 03:48 pm
@tanguatlay,
Fortunately I survived the accident with my legs intact, one badly injured but fortunately not severely enough to require amputation. I was blessed with a recovery that now allows me to walk
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Reply Wed 31 Jul, 2013 04:44 pm
@roger,
roger wrote:

I am very lucky. I got into an accident and came out alive. I still have my legs to walk on and to move around with. My leg was not amputated. I am very blessed.

Your original sentences are quite natural. I'm only offering minor possibilities, not corrections.
Thanks. I agree with your corrections.
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