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Sun 5 May, 2013 09:57 pm
I am writing a fictional book, and need a bit of help to decide how an event should end. I thank everyone who participates.
The main character (*Sarah) is a mother of four. Her eldest son is 22, and has been dating his 19 year old girlfriend for over a year. One day, Sarah happens to see her son's girlfriend making out with another guy. Her son has no idea of his girlfriend's affair. What should Sarah do?
*not the real name
@jadsiasun96,
You're the writer. You get to decide.
@jespah,
Something tells me that this isn't actually a part of a writing project/book in the process of being written. Why would this alleged author to be feel the need to create a fake name for his fictional character?
Quote:The main character (*Sarah) is a mother of four. Her eldest son is 22, and has been dating his 19 year old girlfriend for over a year. One day, Sarah happens to see her son's girlfriend making out with another guy. Her son has no idea of his girlfriend's affair. What should Sarah do?
*not the real name
I thinketh the OP is trying to hard for plausible deniablilty to cover her/his tuckas if the possible real world son whose girlfriend is cheating on him finds this thread on their shared computer's browser history.
@tsarstepan,
Psst we're not supposed to know.
@tsarstepan,
I can understand you thinking that, but it is for a book. The reason I asked the question is because I am suffering from writer's block, and my writing partner is unavailable. I also added the fake name because the character's real name is quite unique, so I don't want it to find it anywhere other than my book.
@jadsiasun96,
But why tell us it's a fake name? lol We wouldn't know any different.
@Mame,
I guess I'm used to being honest...
In the US, the mother would have gone over there and whipped her butt - in front of the other guy.
From where I think you are from, jadi, the mother would suffer in silence.
@PUNKEY,
Okay.
Where do you think I'm from?
@jadsiasun96,
In a book I would imagine the mother would face the girl and be quite sarcastic but sharp towards the girlfriend.