Reply Tue 23 Apr, 2013 06:55 am
Dear English teachers,
are my sentences acceptable below? Thank you in advance.
I was skeptical about acupuncture previously because Chinese medical certificates were not well recognized. However, I have trusted it as soon as a Chinese medical doctor cured my injury.
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Setanta
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Reply Tue 23 Apr, 2013 07:01 am
@Loh Jane,
Your use of skeptical is just fine.

In your second sentence, you can dispense with "have"--However, i trusted it as soon as a Chinese medical doctor cured my injury.
Loh Jane
 
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Reply Tue 23 Apr, 2013 07:04 am
@Setanta,
Hi Setanta thanks,
English grammar is so tough and difficult to remember.
Setanta
 
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Reply Tue 23 Apr, 2013 07:15 am
@Loh Jane,
Don't i know it! I'm now in my sixties, and beginning to get a grip on it.
Loh Jane
 
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Reply Tue 23 Apr, 2013 08:20 am
@Setanta,
Dearest Setanta,
I hope I can also begin to get a grip on it when I am in forties.
maxdancona
 
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Reply Tue 23 Apr, 2013 08:30 am
@Loh Jane,
I might also get rid of the word "previously". I don't think it is grammatically incorrect, but it sounds awkward to me and doesn't add anything to the sentence.
Setanta
 
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Reply Tue 23 Apr, 2013 08:33 am
@Loh Jane,
I hope so, too. (One would say, "when i am in my forties.")
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contrex
 
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Reply Tue 23 Apr, 2013 10:31 am
British English spelling: sceptical.
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JTT
 
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Reply Tue 23 Apr, 2013 11:16 pm
@Loh Jane,
Quote:
are my sentences acceptable below?


This one, above, isn't, Jane.

This one, below, is.

Are my sentences, below, acceptable? below


Quote:
I was skeptical about acupuncture previously because Chinese medical certificates were not well recognized. However, I have trusted it as soon as a Chinese medical doctor cured my injury.


Setanta made note that you should drop 'have', which I've underlined above. The reason that it sounds odd here is that when the present perfect is [almost always] used to denote a past action that is current to now, ie. a hot topic, we don't combine it in the same sentence with an adjunct [addition] that notes a past time period or event -->"as soon as a Chinese medical doctor cured my injury".

You could say the following;

I was skeptical about acupuncture previously because Chinese medical certificates were not well recognized. However, I have come to trust it. That happened as soon as a Chinese medical doctor cured my injury.

Another example:

I went to London.

An excited individual

I've been to London!

*??I've been to London last week!??*

[* denotes ungrammatical]

Though it isn't ungrammatical, it is used sometimes for special reasons that I won't describe just now, it is a strange occurrence for native speakers to put the present perfect with a past time adverbial adjunct, in this case - 'last week'.

We would separate the two.

I've been to London! I went last week.
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JTT
 
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Reply Tue 23 Apr, 2013 11:18 pm
@maxdancona,
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I don't think it is grammatically incorrect


It most assuredly is not.

It's a stylistic choice but I don't agree that it adds nothing.
Loh Jane
 
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Reply Wed 24 Apr, 2013 12:46 am
@JTT,
Hi Jkk,since you are online,may I know if my sentence is acceptable below?In the email attachment are the photos.
JTT
 
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Reply Wed 24 Apr, 2013 01:21 am
@Loh Jane,
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Hi Jkk


Hi, Jane. It's jtt, not jkk.

Quote:
may I know if my sentence below is acceptable [below]?


Asking, may I know if my sentence is acceptable below? asks if the position of the sentence is okay, not whether the sentence itself is okay. Word order matters in English. Changing the word order can change meaning.

'may I know' sounds strange. It sounds strange because one can't ask for another's permission to KNOW something.

May I ask if my sentence below is acceptable?

Quote:
In the email attachment are the photos.


If you are asking about the sentence above, in the quote box, yes, it is fine.
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roger
 
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Reply Wed 24 Apr, 2013 01:25 am
@Loh Jane,
May I?

It should be "The photos are in the email attachment". Your sentence isn't exactly wrong, but it sounds very stilted.

When you refer to something below, it will look better if you hit the Enter Key so that what you refer to is actually below, and not beside. Again, it's not wrong, so that's just a suggestion.
JTT
 
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Reply Wed 24 Apr, 2013 01:45 am
@roger,
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Again, it's not wrong, so that's just a suggestion.


Yes, it actually is wrong, Roger, if it's 'beside' and it's described as 'below'.

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May I?


If you're incapable of explaining the whys, perhaps you should take a seat on the sidelines.
Loh Jane
 
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Reply Wed 24 Apr, 2013 01:49 am
Dearest roger,I have replied by using an IPhone and I can't find the 'Enter' key.😩I study English grammar,I am trying to comprehend the fronting and inversion rules because they are confusing.
Loh Jane
 
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Reply Wed 24 Apr, 2013 01:53 am
@JTT,
Sorry JTT,I typed your name wrong.
JTT
 
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Reply Wed 24 Apr, 2013 01:59 am
@Loh Jane,
That's not a problem, Jane. Think nothing of it.
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roger
 
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Reply Wed 24 Apr, 2013 02:10 am
@Loh Jane,
I knew that.

Anyhow, much of the stuff about word order comes down to what seems odd, and not what is wrong.

I have no idea what happens with iPhones, by the way.
Loh Jane
 
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Reply Wed 24 Apr, 2013 02:41 am
@roger,
Dearest roger,my IPhone has no enter key so I couldn't press it just now.
roger
 
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Reply Wed 24 Apr, 2013 02:44 am
@Loh Jane,
I will keep that in mind.
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