@Eliza6826,
Quote:not confident with my last paragraph.
Aiming to achieve integrity cooperation, …….. and to become an international high-tech corporation
Okay Liz but it took almost an hour and still not entirely satisfied that I conveyed your meaning:
(okay but "Aiming for" slightly more straightforward)
Quote: integrity cooperation
(Liz, did you mean "corporate integrity"),
Quote:strict product quality and continuous
("-ly" though I'd have omitted the word entirely as redundant)
Quote: improving after-sales
(okay but not entirely clear, I would have said "after-sales service and support," or just "service and support")
Quote: Lei peide keeps on accumulating
(I might've said "continues accumulating"; but accumulating
what exactly),
Quote:improving in product quality, product service, talent and after-sales to serve clients
(seems entirely redundant)
Quote: and to become an international high-tech corporation
(somehow a let-down)
Aiming for corporate integrity, strict product quality, and improving service and support, Lei peidi continues accumulating laurels hopefully leading to its reputation as
The International High-Tech Corporation
But Liz, stick with it; your task is immensely difficult; don't be discouraged by critics like me
It was a challenging and interesting exercise for an erstwhile writer