@oristarA,
oristarA wrote:If "they" refer to "others" in the writer's mind, how will you correct the sentence below:
Christians all too often create the impression in others that they are arrogant, judgmental, and self-righteous.
Supposed I've written the sentence, in which I've thought mistakenly that "they" referred to "others." And you as a reader, naturally think "they" refer to "Christians." But my original intention was indeed to express this:
Christians all too often create the impression in others' hearts that they (others) are arrogant, judgmental, and self-righteous (and in Christians' hearts, only Christians are humble, kindhearted and good-intentioned and correct)
One of the dangers of pronouns is that they can lead to confusion of what they are referring to.
In the case of your sentence, however, it's fairly clear that "they" refers to "others" in which the impression is made.
Oftentimes writers will substitute the words "the former" and "the latter" instead of pronouns to clarify to whom they are referring, although it may lead to a clumsy sounding sentence.
"Christians all too often create the impression in others that the former are arrogant, judgmental, and self-righteous."