Is that terrible as Grammarly Suggests?

Hi, you lot. I need to pick you guys' brains again. Here is the thing, I found some dreadful comments made by two foreigners roasting the Chinese for embracing some" misguided values and ethical standards"on a Chinese website. Exasperated, I elected to offer my two cents worth on the issues mentioned by the two foreigners by writing something on that website to rebut their arguments. At the same time, I wasn't sure about my writing skills, thanks to English is my second language. So, I chose to post my comments on its Grammaly first , which is a grammar checking website, and led it grade the sentences . The result was depressing cuz it gave me a decidedly low score for my writing style, quality and usage . My questions is: is my English writing really that terrible as Garmmarly suggests ?

I would be grateful if you could take your time to read my above-mentioned comments below -which is aimed to counter their arguments -and offer some thoughts and suggestions in terms of grammar or usage. Thank you. Here we go.

" No one would refute the claim that some perceived notions or perceptions are rampant in China, reinforced by the mounting influence of mercantilism and cronyism that play into the hands of vested interests or interest groups at the expense of the poor. And it's tempting to say that most Chinese people are keen to hobnob with white folks while giving the cold shoulder to black people as described by someone here.

However, would it be fair to single out the Chinese as the culprits of such racialism while disregarding the fact that scads of Chinese citizens or netizens have been reviled and lampooned by foreign racists online or even in reality? Let us imagine a situation in which you are Chinese and in the middle of talking to a foreigner. Then, this person launches into a tirade against China and your race, peppered with derogatory terms like gooks or other ghastly utterances. Can you put up with it ? Or let's make it more blunt, what would you do when you were being despised by a tetchy foreigner gung-ho about trashing your race in your own nation? Would you just shrug it off and titter at this person for being a dunderhead?

I bet you wouldn't condone such impertinence and misdemeanors and even feel compelled to stick up for your own people and your own nation's reputation or your people's amour-propre. The thinking goes, a courageous bloke from Belgium would take the trouble to take on anyone trying to pillory Belgium . An Argentinian wouldn't mind being a patriot in such circumstances when its nation is being denigrated by foreign racists. It's not a matter of nationalism. It's more or less a matter of pride or honor. It's a matter of self-respect and national dignity.

Indeed, We do have lots of weaknesses in our social system, not to mention some social ills vitiating the foundations of our time-honored Chinese culture or moral principles, punctuated by pervasive nepotism and paternalism reeking off snobbery, inertia and even silliness . And the above-mentioned malicious forces are the three drags for us if we fancy building up a social system in which equality or fairness is order of the day, whereas corruption, financial shenanigans and trickery are frowned upon by commoners or even ruling elites having the guts to decry bureaucracy and embrace populism. To that end, we need more higher-caliber, intrepid boffins or tech-savvy geeks rather than more self-righteous functionaries bent on fending for themselves.

It helps that more able-bodied or well-bred foreigners are content to come to China to sniff out business opportunities or seek out jobs , just like all the ladies and gents you can find on this website, making immense contributions to the development of this kind of civilized society. And it also provides the Chinese a chance to learn a thing or two from you guys about Western collective norms or social codes while strengthening bonds between us.

And it's no stretch to say that for all the misunderstandings and difficulties facing us , we can be friends who need each other when we are in a pickle, regardless their nationalities or even beliefs. Why would we square off against each other since we live on the same planet? The forces of globalization, set out in Thomas Friedman's masterpiece, The World is Flat, will take us to an integrated, harmonious world devoid of the fetters of localism and patronage, leveling off the playing field as Thomas Friedman, who is a respectable erudite, writes in his insightful book.

Well, maybe it sounds little bit fanciful in a world hemmed in nationalism and statism. But there are grounds to believe that people from China, America, Britain or other parts of the world will work together to iron out the kinks and make a better future for mankind and our posterity."