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Please tell me your intuition: Does this sentence sound clear and natural in your ears? Yes or No

 
 
Reply Sun 27 Jan, 2013 12:49 am
Nowadays hearts are brave no more but greedy.
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Reply Sun 27 Jan, 2013 01:23 am
@oristarA,
Using synecdoche, a part for a whole," hearts" used in place of" men ", makes your sentence more poetic. It is understandable, but unnatural if we think of ordinary, everyday prose.
Nowadays men are no longer brave; they are greedy. This is clearer, less elevated in tone. Which is better is a matter of personal taste and context.
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Reply Sun 27 Jan, 2013 02:58 am
@oristarA,
I would say this sounds more natural...

Nowadays, Peoples hearts are not brave anymore, but greedy...

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Reply Sun 27 Jan, 2013 04:14 am
Thank you both.
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