Do you have a feeling that 1) is excellent English? Yes or No?

No.

What is "excellent" English?

No.

Thanks for replying.
But it is from King James version of Holy Bible.
How dare you two say NO?

KJV is crappy english. Its been "Updated" more times than King Kong

How dare you question our response.

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Seriously.

If you want to use the KJV as an example of the kind of English you're going to use in translations, your career will be over soon. People laugh enough at Chinese into English translations already. You don't need to add any further dimension to the humour.

We've got the same feeling. I felt it was awkward when reading kjv.

But an analysis that is more detailed will be more appreciated.

Some say Elizabethan English is beautiful and that may be a matter of personal taste. The main reason why the King James Bible is still widely used by most biblical scholars is because so many reference and study books have been written around the KJV text that it is easier to trace the usages and common occurrences of the words. Lexicons, concordances (with exhaustive and analytical numbering systems), interlinear books, companion Bible texts etc... Thus it is easier to follow a certain Elizabethan word back to its original Greek, Aramaic or Hebrew counterparts and also to cross reference where the Greek, Aramaic or Hebrew word was used before and in what context. The other translations simply have not caught up to the KJV in this regard yet... Once you reshuffle the words into a new translation the numerous KJV reference books become useless.

For its time, it almost certainly was, Ori.

Yes I agree.
The game is over now for James.

Thanks for selecting my answer, much appreciated!