@oristarA,
Consequently, I put forward the hypothesis that the intensity of the mental health disturbances of any individual resorting to extreme violence is merely indicative of the socialisation of the violence used ( Cotter, 2006). In this model, political crime, as represented by Hitler and other Nazi leaders, is associated with low intensity psychological problems (Browning, 1992 ). Suffering from mild symptoms, Nazi extremists were able to rationalise extreme violence and construct an ideology, disseminated amongst members of targeted groups.
On the other hand, in contact crime (where there is physical contact between aggressor and victim, e.g. serial killers), individuals are affected by psychological disorders so severe that they are incapable of building a complex Weltanschauung (a theory of the world) ( Jäckel, 1972) to vindicate their use of violence.
While I don't profess to completely understand this theory, presented as it is here, in a very limited sense, I have to say again, there is nothing whatsoever wrong with it grammatically.
Unless I have missed something.
Writing can be unclear for a number of reasons, but ungrammatical leaps out at native speakers. Sometimes there is something that is marginally ungrammatical. This too, leaps out.
I read it twice, for grammar, before I posted my opinion that it was fine in a grammatical sense. I really hadn't bothered to read it for meaning until now.
I'd say that this [socialization] makes a comparison between the mental states of people and this is dependent upon how widespread the 'socialization' is, ie. how many people are included in any action that is extremely violent.
Hitler's violence was widely 'socialized', spread out among many people. So according to this theory, "the intensity of the mental health disturbances" were relatively low for Hitler and other Nazis.
In a serial killer situation, the 'socialization' is not at all widespread. It is limited to one, or at most a few individuals. The theory [in my understanding] says that it then becomes much more difficult for "individuals [who] are affected by psychological disorders so severe that they are incapable of building a complex Weltanschauung (a theory of the world) ( Jäckel, 1972) to vindicate their use of violence".
Violence spread out among many is violence that is not so personally debilitating. The "responsibility", being shared by many, weighs much less per individual. With much of the burden gone in an individual sense, the violence can even come to be seen as a positive.
Consider just how easy it is for Americans to "build a complex Weltanschauung (a theory of the world) ( Jäckel, 1972) to vindicate their use of violence".
America is a shining beacon. // The US is the savior of the oppressed. // The US represents all that is good in the world. // ... .
Quote:If so, in " is merely indicative of the socialisation of the violence used ( Cotter, 2006)", "the violence used" clearly refers to "the violence used by other people of the society (not the serial killer)"?