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Mon 22 Oct, 2012 07:58 am
I need to write a letter to a new friend. Please help me check it in terms of appropriate language style.
Dear Tom,
Thank you for offering me the chance to participate in the school project. I am delighted and accept your offer. I want to know details about this project, so I suggest that you and I meet in campus cafeteria, on Friday, October 19, at 6p.m. Let me know if you are coming or not.
Thank you again.
Sincerely,
Calvin
@ziawj2,
Thank
s you for offering me the chance to participate
in the school project.
I am Delighted and
accept your offer. I want
to know details
about this project, so
I suggest that you and I let's meet in campus cafeteria,
on Friday, October 19,
at 6p.m.
Let me know if you are coming or not.
Dale:
What is that? A telegram?
Joe(nice green BTW)Nation
@Joe Nation,
Not quite, Joe
Zia, "for" should have stayed in black
To meet fully Joe's reasonable objection however, place "the" before "cafeteria"
@ziawj2,
I see no problem with this letter at all, other than placing the definite article before the word "cafetria." Good job.
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