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Mon 17 Sep, 2012 06:27 am
I wrote a memo in formal and informal style. Could you help me to check it?I need to wrote about 100 words, but I do not konw what I could add. Could you give me some advice? Thank you!
formal
Memo
To: All schoolmates
From：Wu Jing, Wings of sky
Date: September 13
Subject: Movie night
A movie (Spiderman) night is organized in Classroom A001 at 7:00 p.m. on Sunday, September 16 by Wings of Sky. All are welcome.
informal
Memo
To: All schoolmates
From：Wu Jing, Monitor
Date: September 13
Subject: Movie night
All of us are facing the stress of Passing the exam, CET-6, this term, so I am planning a movie night to have some fun. We will watch the movie (Spiderman) in Classroom A001 at 7:00 p.m. on Sun., Sep. 16. If you have any suggestion for the movies, please contact me at 18971393955 before Sep. 15. Hope we have a good night.
@ziawj2,
You could add something about refreshments being offered or they can bring their own snacks... don't know what you mean in your informal memo about "any suggestion for the movies", though.
@ziawj2,
formal
Memo
To: All schoolmates
From：Wu Jing, Wings of sky
Date: September 13
Subject: Movie night
See
A movie
(Spiderman) night is organized in Classroom A001
at 7:00 p.m.
on Sunday, September 16 by Wings of Sky.
All are welcome.Welcome all
I'm not sure about "Wings of Sky", maybe misplaced
informal
Memo
To: All schoolmates
From：Wu Jing, Monitor
Date: September 13
Subject: Movie night
All of us
are facing
the stress of Passing the exam, CET-6,
this term, so I am planning aherewith invited to movie night
to have for some fun
:. We will watch the movie (Spiderman) in Classroom A001
at 7:00 p.m.
on Sun., Sep. 16.
If you haveWith any suggestion
for the movies, please contact me at 18971393955 before Sep. 15. Hope we have a
good nightjolly time.
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