@ziawj2,
Quote:This week is coming. I want to have a date with you. I hope you can come. I also have a surprise to you for thanks you.
I am not satisfied the sentences because I think they are not fluent and natural. I made the following changes:
Do you have any plan this weekend? I want to see you then. I have bought you a gift and I am sure you will be surprised at it.
I think your version, while more fluent, also changes what your student was saying?
Does the student really mean "weekend" or was he/she referring to the coming week? The student's surprise might not be a "gift".
Quote:This week is coming. I want to have a date with you. I hope you can come. I also have a surprise to you for thanks you.
I'd like to see you this coming week(end) and I hope you'll be able to join me. I have a surprise for you. Let me know. Thanks.
or
I'd like to make a date with you for this coming week(end). I hope you can accept. I have a surprise for you. Let me know. Thanks.
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