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Can we make it concise like this?

 
 
Reply Thu 5 Apr, 2012 10:12 pm
The drugs can neither directly kill the virus, nor deter the absorption of the virus.
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The drugs can neither directly kill nor deter the absorption of the virus.
 
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Reply Thu 5 Apr, 2012 10:18 pm
@oristarA,
In theory, your re-phrasing leaves unclear wheather "kill" refers to the virus or not. In practice, it will work though.

An alternative rephrasing is: "The drugs can neither directly kill the virus nor deter its absorption." This avoids even the theoretical problem, and it's even one word shorter.
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Reply Thu 5 Apr, 2012 10:40 pm
@Thomas,
Thanks
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