@oristarA,
The difference between the first and second sentences is how the word "further" is being used.
In the first sentence, the word "further" can be read as "what's more," or "additionally."
In the second it seems to mean "to study more in depth."
I think the second phrase could be better put by splitting the infinitive "to study" and inserting the adjective "further:" "and to further study," if that's the sense that you are trying to convey.
P.S. I'm sure JTT is just tickled that you've described his suggestion as " golden Standard English"!