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Any terser expression for this?

 
 
Reply Thu 27 Oct, 2011 09:36 am
The boy who has escaped from death in the great catastrophe will tell me his story.

I try to use "the survived boy will tell me his story," but I don't think it is a sufficient expression to match the original sentence.
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Reply Thu 27 Oct, 2011 10:33 am
@oristarA,
"The boy who survived the great catastrophe" is one possibility.
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contrex
 
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Reply Thu 27 Oct, 2011 10:55 am
@oristarA,
oristarA wrote:
the survived boy


You can't use "survived" as an adjective like that. The boy survivor maybe.
ossobuco
 
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Reply Thu 27 Oct, 2011 11:04 am
@contrex,
You could say "the surviving boy".
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Reply Thu 27 Oct, 2011 01:45 pm
@ossobuco,
ossobuco wrote:
You could say "the surviving boy".


Yes, I know, but the difficulty there is that this implies that he was either the only boy who survived out of all the people or the only survivor out of a group of boys. In fact, going back to the original sentence, the use of the definite article "the" implies some kind of uniqueness about the boy - that he was either the only surviving boy or the only survivor. Unless this is the intention, it would be better to use the indefinite article "A".


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Reply Thu 27 Oct, 2011 01:53 pm
@ossobuco,
ossobuco wrote:

You could say "the surviving boy".


Bada bing.

Just FYI Oristar, terse, while technically correct in the context you use it, has, in English, I think, an implication of shortness of temper or possibly rudeness that means I'd tend to use "more concise" or "less wordy", for instance in its place.
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Reply Thu 27 Oct, 2011 02:51 pm
@dlowan,
dlowan wrote:

ossobuco wrote:

You could say "the surviving boy".


Bada bing.



Is this meant to imply agreement?
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Reply Thu 27 Oct, 2011 02:57 pm
@contrex,
Of course. Oristar used the definite article so I assume he meant to.
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Reply Thu 27 Oct, 2011 03:40 pm
@dlowan,
dlowan wrote:

Of course. Oristar used the definite article so I assume he meant to.


A shaky assumption.
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Reply Thu 27 Oct, 2011 03:45 pm
@contrex,
Not the shaky assumption?
oristarA
 
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Reply Thu 27 Oct, 2011 09:25 pm
@oristarA,
Thank you all.
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contrex
 
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Reply Thu 27 Oct, 2011 11:52 pm
@dlowan,
dlowan wrote:

Not the shaky assumption?


In my opinion, possibly shaky.
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Reply Fri 28 Oct, 2011 12:42 am
@oristarA,
Quote:
escaped from death ... will tell me his story


So nothing unusual then.
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