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Neverending Haiku chain

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firefly
 
  1  
Sun 12 Aug, 2012 08:13 am
@iamsam82,
Don't forget to breathe
After you hit the water,
It's sink or swim time
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 12 Aug, 2012 03:42 pm
@firefly,
It's sink or swim time .
Your small arms clutching my neck,
on tiptoe, slipping.
ossobuco
 
  1  
Sun 12 Aug, 2012 03:47 pm
@Dutchy,
On tiptoe, slipping,
I manuever(e)d the sofa
across the ice rink.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Fri 17 Aug, 2012 03:47 pm
@ossobuco,
across the ice rink,
I spotted your beautiful eyes,
looking at this man.
iamsam82
 
  1  
Sun 26 Aug, 2012 02:19 pm
@Dutchy,
Looking at this man
For whom pain is a stranger,
I envy mirrors.
firefly
 
  1  
Sun 26 Aug, 2012 04:54 pm
@iamsam82,
I envy mirrors
They catch what the eye can miss,
Or chose to ignore
chai2
 
  2  
Sun 26 Aug, 2012 05:27 pm
@firefly,
Or choose to ignore
What's staring you in the face.
It's up to you now.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 26 Aug, 2012 06:37 pm
@chai2,
It's up to you know.
In real life I’d get blank stares,
here, you’re back for more.
ossobuco
 
  1  
Mon 27 Aug, 2012 08:54 am
@Dutchy,
Here, you're back for more
saltwater taffy. Would you
like an assortment?
chai2
 
  1  
Mon 27 Aug, 2012 10:14 am
@ossobuco,
like an assortment?
said the man at the counter
no, I'll take one.
firefly
 
  1  
Mon 27 Aug, 2012 12:03 pm
@chai2,
No, I'll take just one,
Unless you are offering
Buy one get one free
ossobuco
 
  1  
Mon 27 Aug, 2012 01:09 pm
@firefly,
But one, get one free -
double your pleasure and get
two red licorice.

(I'm so old that I remember penny candies in jars at corner stores)
chai2
 
  1  
Mon 27 Aug, 2012 02:58 pm
@ossobuco,
two red licorice
wrapped 'round my lovers heart, the
black kinds bad for it.

http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-2054860/Eating-black-licorice-bad-heart-FDA-warns.html
ossobuco
 
  1  
Mon 27 Aug, 2012 03:05 pm
@ossobuco,
Also, I can't spell 'buy'.
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ossobuco
 
  1  
Mon 27 Aug, 2012 03:07 pm
@chai2,
That's actually interesting, chai.
Personally, I couldn't stand Good + Plenty candy, which is odd since I like fennel and anise and Sambuca, etc.

Back with a haiku effort.
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ossobuco
 
  2  
Mon 27 Aug, 2012 03:12 pm
Black kinds bad for it,
you know. Never mix molasses
with lemon cream sauce.


Where am I going with this? help! New ideas for the starter comment very welcome
Dutchy
 
  1  
Mon 27 Aug, 2012 04:09 pm
@ossobuco,
with lemon cream sauce.
But I am playing catch up,
had to do something.
chai2
 
  2  
Mon 27 Aug, 2012 04:26 pm
@Dutchy,
had to do something
better than doing nothing
what I always say
Dutchy
 
  1  
Mon 27 Aug, 2012 09:20 pm
@chai2,
What I always say.
Goes in one ear and out the
other did you know that?
mackllinvinger
 
  0  
Fri 31 Aug, 2012 01:13 am
YES U ARE RIGHT..

I AGREE WITH YOU.
 

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