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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
firefly
 
  3  
Sat 1 Sep, 2012 04:15 pm
@Dutchy,
Other, did you know that
I often talk to myself,
But I don't listen
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sat 1 Sep, 2012 04:21 pm
@firefly,
But I don't listen.
Isn't that a typical old
female trait firefly? Smile
ossobuco
 
  1  
Sat 1 Sep, 2012 04:22 pm
@mackllinvinger,
Mack - haiku is a poetry format.

In this case, the first line is five syllables long, the second is seven syllables, and the last line is five syllables.

The haiku chain we are doing here means your first line is the same as the last line of the haiku posted before yours.

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firefly
 
  3  
Sat 1 Sep, 2012 06:09 pm
@Dutchy,
Female trait, firefly?
Are you sure about that one?
Some men like to shop
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 2 Sep, 2012 05:53 am
@firefly,
Some men like to shop.
For gadgets and new i-Pads,
never new clothes.
firefly
 
  1  
Wed 5 Sep, 2012 03:31 pm
@Dutchy,
Never new clothes
Just to work around the house,
Put on jeans and sweats.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Thu 6 Sep, 2012 04:19 am
@firefly,
Put on jeans and sweats.
It is getting out the door,
always the worst part.
firefly
 
  1  
Sat 8 Sep, 2012 11:40 am
@Dutchy,
Always the worst part
Of very heavy rainstorms,
Is all the flooding
ossobuco
 
  1  
Sat 8 Sep, 2012 01:19 pm
@firefly,
Is all the flooding
the result of poor drainage
design, or the sky?
solipsister
 
  1  
Wed 12 Sep, 2012 06:47 am
@ossobuco,
design, or the sky?
you can put your hand to both
god knows it matters
firefly
 
  2  
Wed 12 Sep, 2012 10:19 am
@solipsister,
God knows it matters
How we treat each other,
We have to learn that
Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 12 Sep, 2012 03:37 pm
@firefly,
We have to learn that.
Secrets, tears and deepest fears,
that's what friends are for.
shari6905
 
  1  
Sun 7 Oct, 2012 12:52 am
@Dutchy,
Thats what friends are for,
said the popular lady
nobody likes me.
Rockhead
 
  1  
Sun 7 Oct, 2012 12:53 am
@shari6905,
nobody likes me.
now I'm gonna eat some worms
or something like that...
shari6905
 
  1  
Sun 7 Oct, 2012 12:58 am
@Rockhead,
Or something like that,
When I dont understand things,
I am just stupid
Rockhead
 
  2  
Sun 7 Oct, 2012 01:02 am
@shari6905,
I am just stupid
most of the time anyway.
or else I'm asleep.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sun 7 Oct, 2012 02:43 am
@Rockhead,
or else I'm asleep.
Another long sleepless night,
will they never end?


shari6905
 
  1  
Sun 7 Oct, 2012 06:48 am
@Dutchy,
Will they ever end?
The loud voices in my head,
Should I do as told?
ossobuco
 
  1  
Sun 7 Oct, 2012 06:52 am
@shari6905,
Should I do as told?
But I don't want to donate
all my books right now.
firefly
 
  1  
Sun 7 Oct, 2012 01:46 pm
@ossobuco,
All my books right now
Are in a pile by my bed,
I must get some shelves
 

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