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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
gustavratzenhofer
 
  1  
Sat 8 May, 2004 07:58 am
yep, been there, done that
oh ****... now what
I can't think of anything to say
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McTag
 
  1  
Sat 8 May, 2004 08:50 am
I can't think of anything
To, say, compare with
The beauty of the morning
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Sat 8 May, 2004 09:38 am
The beauty of the
morning, shattered by hail and
damaging wind gusts.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Sat 8 May, 2004 11:49 am
damaging wind gust?
Oh my! Are you alright, Beth?
Hope it stops storming!

BTW, Beth, LOVE your haiku re the circus! HA!
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Sat 8 May, 2004 11:55 am
:wink:

Hope it stops storming.
The dogs listen intently,
and scowl at the door.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Sat 8 May, 2004 11:59 am
and scowl at the door
as you left in a big huff
You make me so mad!
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Clary
 
  1  
Sat 8 May, 2004 12:07 pm
You make me so mad!
The way you say 'He gave it
To Janet and I'.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Sat 8 May, 2004 12:15 pm
To Janet and I
read the card in my right hand
"Who's Janet?" I ask.
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Sat 8 May, 2004 01:00 pm
Who's Janet, I ask,
and why is her dress in my
car, and who are you?
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Clary
 
  1  
Sat 8 May, 2004 02:15 pm
Car, and who are you?
And why are you called car, may
I ask that too, mate?
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Sat 8 May, 2004 03:20 pm
I ask that too, mate.
I turn it over and then
I wonder some more.
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Clary
 
  1  
Sat 8 May, 2004 04:00 pm
I wonder some more
At the glittering spikes that
Cling to the pine trees.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Sat 8 May, 2004 07:21 pm
Cling to the pine trees!
It's quite a blustery day.
wind whips us about
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gustavratzenhofer
 
  1  
Sun 9 May, 2004 07:04 am
wind whips us about
causing our bones
to snap like twigs
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Clary
 
  1  
Sun 9 May, 2004 07:39 am
To snap like twigs,
The cereals are processed
With lots of sugar.
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Sun 9 May, 2004 08:20 am
With lots of sugar,
I get wildly, madly gay,
and throw my arms up.
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Clary
 
  1  
Sun 9 May, 2004 08:49 am
And throw my arms up
Closely followed by my legs,
Abdomen and chest.
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Sun 9 May, 2004 09:05 am
Abdomen and chest.
Is it me, or some other
fine creature observed?
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Clary
 
  1  
Sun 9 May, 2004 09:11 am
Fine creature observed
Through the misty French windows
Among the willows.
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Sun 9 May, 2004 09:37 am
Among the willows,
the bitterns stand quietly,
waiting til we leave.
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