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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Clary
 
  1  
Thu 6 May, 2004 12:57 pm
Bush for President?
Don't make me laugh. He can't get
In again, surely?
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fealola
 
  1  
Thu 6 May, 2004 12:59 pm
In again, surely
Tonight? I have a headache!
Trash the Viagra!
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Rod3
 
  1  
Thu 6 May, 2004 05:10 pm
Trash the Viagra
I don't need it tonight babe
Back to my old self
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Thu 6 May, 2004 05:25 pm
Back to my old self,
dented and bruised and covered
in grass stains. It's spring.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Thu 6 May, 2004 06:11 pm
In grass stains its spring
on fresh white linen cloths too
falls sweet pink punch.
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Thu 6 May, 2004 06:52 pm
hmmmm
need to add a syllable there
hmmmmm


Falls in sweet pink punch,
recovers nicely, but then
trips over two big dogs.

:wink:
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devriesj
 
  1  
Thu 6 May, 2004 07:17 pm
oops! my bad!...

trips over two ___ dogs
on the way out of the house.
This is not my house!

hey, is it just me or did you ADD a syllable to the first line?!
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Thu 6 May, 2004 07:23 pm
hehehehe

i meant to add one syllable in total - and then added two in my fervour Embarrassed

This is not my house,
this is not my car, but I
can bark anyway!
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devriesj
 
  1  
Fri 7 May, 2004 09:17 am
Can bark anyway,
I can. I'm a dog, I am
barking in the wind.
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Equus
 
  1  
Fri 7 May, 2004 04:33 pm
Barking in the wind--
It does no good for neighbors.
Dog does it for fun.
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Fri 7 May, 2004 05:47 pm
Dog does it for fun.
Ears flying back in the breeze.
Enjoying the drive.
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devriesj
 
  1  
Fri 7 May, 2004 06:50 pm
Enjoying the drive
up the California coast
wind blowing my hair
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Fri 7 May, 2004 07:13 pm
Wind, blowing my hair
up and around my head, a
scarf would have been smart.
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colorbook
 
  1  
Fri 7 May, 2004 07:28 pm
Scarf would have been smart
Convertible drive top down
My hair in tangles
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devriesj
 
  1  
Fri 7 May, 2004 07:44 pm
My hair in tangles
the hazards of a trapeze
artist in circus!
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Fri 7 May, 2004 07:50 pm
Artist. In circus
circles, that means you're willing
to suspend yourself.
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colorbook
 
  1  
Fri 7 May, 2004 08:44 pm
to suspend yourself
high above the fleeting crowd
just bungee jumping
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Clary
 
  1  
Sat 8 May, 2004 01:48 am
Just bungee jumping
sky diving, paragliding
Through life; wonderful!
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Sat 8 May, 2004 06:51 am
Through life wonderful
things happen, kisses and hugs
and burbling babies.
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colorbook
 
  1  
Sat 8 May, 2004 07:21 am
and burbling babies
diapers, bottles, burping
yep, been there, done that
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