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Neverending Haiku chain

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Rockhead
 
  2  
Fri 12 Feb, 2010 11:32 pm
@Dutchy,
green grass is growing
in the rutted wagon tracks
of wheels long retired
Dutchy
 
  1  
Sat 13 Feb, 2010 05:22 am
@Rockhead,
of wheels long retired .
arguing about nothing,
on here, what a waste.
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sullyfish6
 
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Sat 13 Feb, 2010 08:36 am
On here, what a waste
Try changing a mind
Reality never measures up
McTag
 
  0  
Sat 13 Feb, 2010 05:55 pm
@sullyfish6,

Reality never measures up
Nor yet reckons syllables
For haikus, not good.
tsarstepan
 
  2  
Sat 13 Feb, 2010 06:28 pm
@McTag,
For haikus, not good?
Everyone's a critic.
We are all poets.
Dutchy
 
  2  
Sat 13 Feb, 2010 06:48 pm
@tsarstepan,
We ar all poets.
Some call it a dreamers moon,
others something cool.
iamsam82
 
  1  
Wed 17 Feb, 2010 03:14 am
@Dutchy,
Others something cool
Discern within the waters -
I but passing time.
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sullyfish6
 
  2  
Wed 17 Feb, 2010 02:33 pm
I, but passing time
from going crazy
A2K soothes my soul.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 17 Feb, 2010 03:12 pm
@sullyfish6,
A2K soothes my soul.
For all the lost time and words,
all of it spilled now.
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sullyfish6
 
  1  
Wed 17 Feb, 2010 03:15 pm
All of it spilled now
no secrets to guard
between me and the dead.
iamsam82
 
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Wed 17 Feb, 2010 03:20 pm
@sullyfish6,
"Between me and the dead" -
One syllable too many...
"Twixt me and the dead"?
Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 17 Feb, 2010 03:27 pm
@iamsam82,
"Twixt me and the dead"?
Does it really matter we are
amongst friends down here.
iamsam82
 
  0  
Wed 17 Feb, 2010 03:38 pm
@Dutchy,
No... no Dutchy, I suppose it doesn't really -
We should write absolutely anything, disregarding form and convention.
That makes the challenge all the more fun in my opinion... ...
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sullyfish6
 
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Wed 17 Feb, 2010 05:12 pm
Amongst friends down here
The hot air starts
Signifying nothing
Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 17 Feb, 2010 05:35 pm
@sullyfish6,
Signifying nothing.
Have written better haiku
than I can today.

(I agree with your comments iamsam82)
iamsam82
 
  1  
Thu 18 Feb, 2010 08:12 am
@Dutchy,
That I can today
Stand tall in the mundane throng
Is thanks to her wings.
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sullyfish6
 
  1  
Thu 18 Feb, 2010 10:13 am
Is thanks to her wings
All I can do
at this end-game?
iamsam82
 
  1  
Thu 18 Feb, 2010 10:56 am
@sullyfish6,
At this end-game's start,
Stood at this crossroads, I find
I would be four mes.
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sullyfish6
 
  0  
Thu 18 Feb, 2010 12:12 pm
I would be four me's
If I could decide
to split myself
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McTag
 
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Thu 18 Feb, 2010 01:50 pm

Sully, don't be such a pain. It's 5-7-5.

If your last line hasn't got 5 syllables, the next person has to change it.
If the other two lines are likewise wrong, your haiku is pointless.
And posting as often as you do, it ruins the thread.
Okay?
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