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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Dutchy
 
  1  
Thu 11 Feb, 2010 02:22 pm
@iamsam82,
Permeate the world.
Snow, up to an inch or more,
How could that be wrong?
ossobuco
 
  1  
Thu 11 Feb, 2010 04:18 pm
@Dutchy,
How could that be wrong,
they said, as they watched the gold
coins drop from the sky.
oolongteasup
 
  1  
Thu 11 Feb, 2010 10:27 pm
@ossobuco,
coins drop from the sky
raining over us like gods
to welcome strangers
ossobuco
 
  1  
Thu 11 Feb, 2010 10:36 pm
@oolongteasup,
to welcome strangers
the cottage door opens and
the dog runs about
McTag
 
  1  
Fri 12 Feb, 2010 02:12 am
@ossobuco,

the dog runs about
five miles early in the day
not much after that
iamsam82
 
  1  
Fri 12 Feb, 2010 07:11 am
@McTag,
Not much after that;
That passing of the body -
That passing of all.
0 Replies
 
The Pen is
 
  1  
Fri 12 Feb, 2010 09:00 am
That passing of all
Time making puddings out of
The mud of lifetimes.
iamsam82
 
  1  
Fri 12 Feb, 2010 09:05 am
@The Pen is,
The mud of lifetimes;
Seppia stains on special card;
Yellow-smiled albums.
ossobuco
 
  1  
Fri 12 Feb, 2010 01:04 pm
@iamsam82,
Yellow-smiled albums,
diaries with pink ribbons,
posters on the walls
iamsam82
 
  3  
Fri 12 Feb, 2010 02:17 pm
@ossobuco,
Posters on the walls,
Peeling; revealing faces
Pinned in former minds.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Fri 12 Feb, 2010 03:15 pm
@iamsam82,
Pinned in former minds.
Like watching the Earth open,
one thought at a time.
iamsam82
 
  1  
Fri 12 Feb, 2010 03:42 pm
@Dutchy,
One thought at a time
The slow drop beckons earthward,
Measured in teacups.
0 Replies
 
sullyfish6
 
  1  
Fri 12 Feb, 2010 03:47 pm
Measured in teacups
Mother drinks her sherry
Behind lace curtains
Dutchy
 
  1  
Fri 12 Feb, 2010 03:55 pm
@sullyfish6,
Behind lace curtains
My girlfriend is a princess,
special for some fun.
iamsam82
 
  1  
Fri 12 Feb, 2010 04:39 pm
@Dutchy,
"Special" for some fun.
Must it always be "special"?
Can't we just daydream?
0 Replies
 
sullyfish6
 
  2  
Fri 12 Feb, 2010 07:13 pm
Can't we just daydream
As if we were in love
on Valentine's Day
Dutchy
 
  2  
Fri 12 Feb, 2010 09:48 pm
@sullyfish6,
on Valentine's Day,
your friendship is natural,
free as the hawks wing.
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Fri 12 Feb, 2010 09:54 pm
@Dutchy,
free as the hawk's wing
after being clipped by wire
bird and wing plummet
ossobuco
 
  3  
Fri 12 Feb, 2010 10:12 pm
@tsarstepan,
bird and wing plummet,
hippos do slow dance;
nature varies so.
Dutchy
 
  1  
Fri 12 Feb, 2010 11:26 pm
@ossobuco,
Nature varies so.
Sun is out and shinning bright,
green grass is growing.
 

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