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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 6 Feb, 2008 04:04 am
Things happen at sea.
The Titanic comes to mind,
So many victims.
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Clary
 
  1  
Wed 6 Feb, 2008 04:17 am
So many victims
Of wars, so many men who
Enjoy fighting them.
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Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 6 Feb, 2008 04:58 am
Enjoy fighting them.
Eternal peace wanted now,
Would you not agree?
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Clary
 
  1  
Wed 6 Feb, 2008 01:47 pm
Would you not agree
With those who say you are a
Selfish, mean person?
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Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 6 Feb, 2008 04:10 pm
Selfish, mean person?
What that message tells me
is not very nice.
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solipsister
 
  1  
Wed 6 Feb, 2008 06:54 pm
Dutchy wrote:
Selfish, mean person?
What that message tells me
is not very nice.


Is not very, nice?
Summer's nigh on flawless gem
Tumbling into night.
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Dutchy
 
  1  
Wed 6 Feb, 2008 06:59 pm
Tumbling into night
So beautiful poetic
Like a silver moon.
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The Pen is
 
  1  
Thu 7 Feb, 2008 02:59 am
Like a silver moon
In an inky sky, Helen
Lit up the ballroom.
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solipsister
 
  1  
Thu 7 Feb, 2008 07:33 pm
The Pen is wrote:
Like a silver moon
In an inky sky, Helen
Lit up the ballroom.


Lit up the ballroom
so as stairs climbed gingerly
lead to no travail.
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Dutchy
 
  1  
Thu 7 Feb, 2008 07:49 pm
lead to no travail.
Childbirth is so beautiful,
I remember it well.
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 8 Feb, 2008 11:46 am
I remember it.
Well, in those days I could count
To five. Clever me.
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Dutchy
 
  1  
Fri 8 Feb, 2008 06:51 pm
To five. Clever me.
You are such a smart whiz kidd
Why don't you teach me.
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solipsister
 
  1  
Fri 8 Feb, 2008 08:58 pm
Dutchy wrote:
To five. Clever me.
You are such a smart whiz kidd
Why don't you teach me.


Why don't you teach me
syntax, o pen to describe
skies of darkling night
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Fri 8 Feb, 2008 09:13 pm
Skies of darkling night
Can the mortal comprehend
the meaning of this
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Dutchy
 
  1  
Fri 8 Feb, 2008 09:18 pm
the meaning of this
sounds so very romantic,
music to my ears.
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Clary
 
  1  
Sat 9 Feb, 2008 03:19 am
Music, to my ears,
Has to be classical; pop
Just doesn't cut it.
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McTag
 
  1  
Sat 9 Feb, 2008 04:28 am
Just doesn't cut it
Does it, eh? Blunt-bladed knives
Are just so, like, pants.
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Clary
 
  1  
Sat 9 Feb, 2008 04:33 am
Are just so, like pants
Stretched upon a washing line
In order of size.
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McTag
 
  1  
Sat 9 Feb, 2008 04:38 am
In order of size
Marrows in ranks, judgement day
At the village fete
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Dutchy
 
  1  
Sat 9 Feb, 2008 05:42 am
At the village fete
Farmers sell their fresh products,
Straight to the public.
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