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Neverending Haiku chain

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McTag
 
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Mon 4 Feb, 2008 03:04 am
Dutchy wrote:
Else all is unclear Laughing Laughing

You'll be misconstrued
That's what mum used to say
And she was so right.


Yes, I thought that was an unhelpful first line, so I changed it. Sorry.

Very Happy

And she was so right
To throw out that stinking fish
It was really vile
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Dutchy
 
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Mon 4 Feb, 2008 03:13 am
:wink:

It was really vile.
So we start all over again.
I'm dropping my line.
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The Pen is
 
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Mon 4 Feb, 2008 05:36 am
I'm dropping my line
Into the clear waters of
Lake Titicaca.
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Clary
 
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Mon 4 Feb, 2008 11:45 am
Lake Titicaca
Can't be as romantic as
It sounds; polluted?
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McTag
 
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Mon 4 Feb, 2008 11:52 am
It sounds polluted-
Cannery Row, Gasworks Lane
Dumpington-on-Sea
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Dutchy
 
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Mon 4 Feb, 2008 08:52 pm
Dumpington-on-sea
An apt name for ditching stuff.
The sea should be saved.
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Clary
 
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Tue 5 Feb, 2008 03:26 am
The sea should be saved
In a metal bucket, and
Kept cool in the fridge.
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Dutchy
 
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Tue 5 Feb, 2008 04:00 am
Kept cool in the fridge.
What an absolute cracker
Riding the waves.
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Clary
 
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Tue 5 Feb, 2008 06:12 am
Riding the waves
The sleek surfer impresses
All the onlookers.
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Dutchy
 
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Tue 5 Feb, 2008 06:20 am
All the onlookers
Stand in awe watching Dutchy
performing his tricks.
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Clary
 
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Tue 5 Feb, 2008 07:10 am
Performing his tricks,
The chimpanzee attracted
An astonished crowd.
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Dutchy
 
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Tue 5 Feb, 2008 10:13 pm
Anastonished crowd.
Clapped and cheered the star.
Who took a deep bow.
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Equus
 
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Tue 5 Feb, 2008 10:24 pm
Who took a deep bow?
I just heard fabric ripping.
New ventilation.
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Dutchy
 
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Tue 5 Feb, 2008 11:45 pm
New ventilation.
My gawd what a disaster.
New pant a sure must.
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Clary
 
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Wed 6 Feb, 2008 02:48 am
New pant a sure must -
Words that don't go together.
What is the link, mate?
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Dutchy
 
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Wed 6 Feb, 2008 03:04 am
What is the link, mate?
No imagination?
I don't believe it.
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Clary
 
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Wed 6 Feb, 2008 03:06 am
I don't believe it -
Chinese New Year's finest dish -
Abalone, black moss.
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Dutchy
 
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Wed 6 Feb, 2008 03:12 am
Abalone, black, moss.
Oysters Kilpatrick on tray,
Top seafood for you.
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McTag
 
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Wed 6 Feb, 2008 03:29 am
Top seafood for you
Harvested this very day
Out on the briny
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Clary
 
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Wed 6 Feb, 2008 03:34 am
Out on the briny
There are catastrophes -'Worse
Things happen at sea'.
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