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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Clary
 
  1  
Wed 20 Apr, 2005 12:54 am
For the bowling, shoes
Were doffed and pointed slippers
Donned by the lady.
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Wed 20 Apr, 2005 01:26 am
Donned by the lady,
But also sometimes the man
Those frilly soft things
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firefly
 
  1  
Wed 20 Apr, 2005 06:10 am
Those frilly soft things
We wear to seduce the men
Leave them wanting more
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storm bay
 
  1  
Wed 20 Apr, 2005 01:15 pm
Leave them wanting more
They will not leave thee
They will not abandon thee
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Wed 20 Apr, 2005 10:38 pm
Hi storm_bay...welcome

Haiku poems are 5-7-5 First line 5 syllables, 2nd line 7 and 3rd line 5 :-)

I have just changed lines for you...hope you don't mind :-D

Leave them wanting more
They will not abandon thee
They will not leave thee
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Wed 20 Apr, 2005 10:42 pm
They will not leave thee
Only those who know of thee
They might want to go
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Clary
 
  1  
Thu 21 Apr, 2005 02:21 am
They might want to go
To sea, or become vagrants,
Your pampered children.
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firefly
 
  1  
Thu 21 Apr, 2005 04:18 am
Your pampered children
Expect to get everything
Just like royalty
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kirsten
 
  1  
Thu 21 Apr, 2005 05:08 am
Just like royalty
With that silly little wave
You bid me farewell
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Thu 21 Apr, 2005 05:56 am
You bid me farewell
You go to sit on your throne
Don't forget to flush
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benjamino
 
  1  
Thu 21 Apr, 2005 09:10 am
don't forget to flush
they can climb back up sometimes
for suprise attacks
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Piffka
 
  1  
Thu 21 Apr, 2005 09:14 am
For surprise attacks,
Watch out! They are everywhere.
I want to go home.
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firefly
 
  1  
Thu 21 Apr, 2005 03:56 pm
I want to go home
This party is a washout
What a bunch of duds!
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benjamino
 
  1  
Fri 22 Apr, 2005 02:59 am
what a bunch of duds
four pound each or three for ten
paracetemol
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 22 Apr, 2005 05:08 am
Paracetamol
Ruins your liver if you
Overdose on it.
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Fri 22 Apr, 2005 05:12 am
Overdose on it
Chocolate is addictive
Light or dark or white
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 22 Apr, 2005 05:34 am
Light or dark or white,
Beer has a vast number of
Differing flavours
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partyfiend
 
  1  
Fri 22 Apr, 2005 07:54 am
Differing flavours.
Can never make up my mind.
Chocolate again.
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firefly
 
  1  
Fri 22 Apr, 2005 11:09 am
Chocolate again
And again, and then, again
It shows on my hips
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kirsten
 
  1  
Fri 22 Apr, 2005 02:00 pm
It shows on my hips
That brief moment on my lips
Ah the price we pay!
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