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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Intrepid
 
  1  
Fri 18 Mar, 2005 04:26 am
when we look like smurfs
it can make us feel so blue
do I look like you
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willow tl
 
  1  
Fri 18 Mar, 2005 04:57 am
do I look like you?
Not in an outward fashion,
but inside we are.
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Equus
 
  1  
Fri 18 Mar, 2005 02:04 pm
But inside we are
all alike- both me and you.
'Cept for your tumor.
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Fri 18 Mar, 2005 02:07 pm
'Cept for your tumor
In that place where we all know
it lacks all humor
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 18 Mar, 2005 03:57 pm
It lacks all humor -
The average Hollywood block
Buster. We want laughs.
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firefly
 
  1  
Fri 18 Mar, 2005 06:15 pm
Buster, we want laughs
So start with the one-liners
Then add some great jokes
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Fri 18 Mar, 2005 06:26 pm
Then, add some good jokes
before stirring up the crowd.
Giggles will ensue.
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Fri 18 Mar, 2005 09:50 pm
Giggles will ensue
after my fingers touch you
you will surely smile
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Fri 18 Mar, 2005 10:11 pm
You will surely smile,
to imagine the laughter
we'll share at the beach.
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Fri 18 Mar, 2005 10:12 pm
we'll share at the beach
that bottle of rare red wine
lying on the sand
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Fri 18 Mar, 2005 10:17 pm
Lying on the sand,
we see sand dollars, pretend
they're real and buy dreams.
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Fri 18 Mar, 2005 10:23 pm
they're real and buy dreams
those silver dollars I found
we dream together
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Fri 18 Mar, 2005 10:35 pm
We dream together,
of ice cream cones and quiet
feather pillow fights.
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Fri 18 Mar, 2005 10:38 pm
feather pillow fights
cloud our real passion games
come lie with me now
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gravy
 
  1  
Sat 19 Mar, 2005 03:24 am
come lie with me now
grandma does not need to know
where the cookies are
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firefly
 
  1  
Sat 19 Mar, 2005 05:47 am
Where the cookies are
Is where my heart longs to be
A very sweet place
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Sat 19 Mar, 2005 05:51 am
A very sweet place
My happy and safe place
Inside my own head
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Rod3
 
  1  
Sat 19 Mar, 2005 06:41 am
Inside my own head
I am king of all I see
But don't tell anyone.
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Sat 19 Mar, 2005 06:46 am
But don't tell anyone
Of everything you have heard
I will rule some day
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Rod3
 
  1  
Sat 19 Mar, 2005 07:01 am
I will rule some day
Of what realm I do not know
Maybe a dream world.
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