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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Intrepid
 
  1  
Wed 9 Mar, 2005 09:18 pm
Lie our real stories
hidden behind ugly words
the truth eminates
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gravy
 
  1  
Wed 9 Mar, 2005 11:50 pm
the truth emanates,
the moonlit breeze tresspasses,
the treeleaves chatter
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Rod3
 
  1  
Thu 10 Mar, 2005 04:42 am
The treeleaves chatter
Flora and Fauna delight
Such is natures way
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firefly
 
  1  
Thu 10 Mar, 2005 05:09 am
Such is nature's way
Each death is followed by life
Constant renewal
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Thu 10 Mar, 2005 06:58 am
Constant renewal
lifegiving juices flow free
into the future
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gravy
 
  1  
Thu 10 Mar, 2005 07:03 pm
into the future
time keeps on ticking ticking
sometimes in reverse
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 11 Mar, 2005 02:40 am
Sometimes in reverse
I hit posts and hidden stones.
A lousy driver.
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firefly
 
  1  
Fri 11 Mar, 2005 04:32 am
A lousy driver
Merits high insurance rates
Their wheels are weapons
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Clary
 
  1  
Fri 11 Mar, 2005 04:40 am
Their wheels are weapons
Their mudguards and fins are shields
Against enemies.
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Fri 11 Mar, 2005 06:49 am
Against enemies
Retaliation was quick
but not decisive
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gravy
 
  1  
Fri 11 Mar, 2005 03:39 pm
but not decisive
like I am....on second thought
he was, or was he?
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firefly
 
  1  
Sat 12 Mar, 2005 06:36 am
He was, or was he
Not with a blonde last evening?
Cheating on his wife?
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Sat 12 Mar, 2005 08:35 am
Cheating on his wife?
Ney, not he who was faithful
without being caught
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kirsten
 
  1  
Sat 12 Mar, 2005 06:58 pm
Without being caught
I can creep to the kitchen
Haagen Dazs calling
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Sat 12 Mar, 2005 08:16 pm
Haagen Dazs calling
yes eat me before I melt
for I am woman
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Sun 13 Mar, 2005 09:45 am
For I am woman,
with scrapes and scratches under
fancy patterned hose.
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firefly
 
  1  
Sun 13 Mar, 2005 09:54 am
Fancy patterned hose
Make my legs look much too fat
I don't need that help!
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gravy
 
  1  
Sun 13 Mar, 2005 01:58 pm
{
ehBeth wrote:
For I am woman/with scrapes and scratches under/fancy patterned hose.

...beautiful imagery and levels...}

I don't need that help
unless it comes from the heart
without strings attached
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Sun 13 Mar, 2005 02:51 pm
without strings attached
I am but a puppet child
Where does my path lead
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Lord Ellpus
 
  1  
Mon 14 Mar, 2005 12:22 am
Where does my path lead

And who is this Woman?

I wish I was Sober
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