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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
gravy
 
  1  
Sun 6 Mar, 2005 01:08 am
together always
tweedle dee and tweedle dum
then the rattle broke
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firefly
 
  1  
Mon 7 Mar, 2005 04:34 am
Then the rattle broke
After the dog chewed it up
And barfed on the rug
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Diane
 
  1  
Mon 7 Mar, 2005 05:12 pm
And barfed on the rug
Evidence of naughtiness
And endearing guilt.
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gravy
 
  1  
Tue 8 Mar, 2005 12:03 am
and endearing guilt
like the boy's shocked, sorry face
having squished a snail
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kirsten
 
  1  
Tue 8 Mar, 2005 12:22 pm
having squished a snail
beneath my tender bare foot
I shall wear my shoes
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counterpoint
 
  1  
Tue 8 Mar, 2005 05:37 pm
I shall wear my shoes
being in someone else's
doesnt help me walk
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Tue 8 Mar, 2005 06:29 pm
Doesn't help me walk
Keeps me on my toes always
I wait by the phone
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gravy
 
  1  
Tue 8 Mar, 2005 09:58 pm
I wait by the phone
the mug of tea in my hand
slowly turning cold
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littlek
 
  1  
Tue 8 Mar, 2005 10:35 pm
Slowly turning cold
The early thaw's daffodils
Begin to wither
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Tue 8 Mar, 2005 11:15 pm
Begin to wither
O, but had I listened carefully,
I could have all parts
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Clary
 
  1  
Wed 9 Mar, 2005 09:02 am
I could have all parts
In Othello rewritten
For autistic kids.
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counterpoint
 
  1  
Wed 9 Mar, 2005 09:54 am
For autistic kids
rare skills are commonplace when
reaching out is tough
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Intrepid
 
  1  
Wed 9 Mar, 2005 09:56 am
reaching out is tough
it's easy to keep inside
what wants to come out
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gravy
 
  1  
Wed 9 Mar, 2005 11:33 am
what wants to come out
is best allowed an exit
freedom is precious
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Equus
 
  1  
Wed 9 Mar, 2005 12:26 pm
Freedom is precious
But doesn't come from gold mines
Only from the heart
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counterpoint
 
  1  
Wed 9 Mar, 2005 06:31 pm
Only from the heart
does great music emanate
feelings beget notes
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Diane
 
  1  
Wed 9 Mar, 2005 06:37 pm
Feeling beget notes
And too often depression
In creative souls.

(All of you are so talented. These haikus have been unusually beautiful.)
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Wed 9 Mar, 2005 07:25 pm
In creative souls
hide the winter buds that spring
will release in words.
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gravy
 
  1  
Wed 9 Mar, 2005 08:19 pm
will release in words
my soul's confessions of love
in unheard whispers
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ehBeth
 
  1  
Wed 9 Mar, 2005 09:01 pm
In unheard whispers,
in dreams, in silenced laughter,
lie our real stories.
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