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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
Clary
 
  1  
Wed 25 Aug, 2004 06:07 am
What faulty logic
Decided that women look
Better in high heels?
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drom et reve
 
  1  
Wed 25 Aug, 2004 06:19 am
Better in high heels
And an elephant costume:
Break a leg, actor!


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cavfancier
 
  1  
Wed 25 Aug, 2004 06:23 am
Break a leg, actor
and maybe an arm as well
then you will be 'cast'
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firefly
 
  1  
Wed 25 Aug, 2004 06:24 am
Break a leg, actor!
That Cyrano nose suits you
The critics will rave!
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firefly
 
  1  
Wed 25 Aug, 2004 06:27 am
pipped by cav--

Then you will be 'cast'
In bronze, perhaps, or copper
Not molded in stone
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Clary
 
  1  
Thu 26 Aug, 2004 12:07 am
Not molded in stone
Or in plaster of Paris.
Full metal jacket.
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drom et reve
 
  1  
Thu 26 Aug, 2004 01:55 am
Full metal jacket
May look stylish in Paris,
But it's quite heavy.

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Clary
 
  1  
Thu 26 Aug, 2004 03:39 am
But it's quite heavy,
The air full of water and
Thunder and lightning.
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hey Ya
 
  1  
Thu 26 Aug, 2004 05:18 am
Thunder and Lightning;
Two of nature's great Forces,
I see from dark clouds.
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firefly
 
  1  
Thu 26 Aug, 2004 05:32 am
I see from dark clouds
Those humans struggling below
How they waste their time!
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hey Ya
 
  1  
Thu 26 Aug, 2004 05:48 am
How they waste their time,
on senseless converstions
when earth is dying.
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firefly
 
  1  
Thu 26 Aug, 2004 05:56 am
When earth is dying
Heavens will look down and weep
At what was squandered
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drom et reve
 
  1  
Thu 26 Aug, 2004 05:58 am
At what was squandered,
People wail and try to see
What stood there before.


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hey Ya
 
  1  
Thu 26 Aug, 2004 06:10 am
What stood there before,
was a verdant Rainforest.
But all now is gone.
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firefly
 
  1  
Thu 26 Aug, 2004 06:13 am
But all now is gone
And an empty void remains
Like a gaping wound
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drom et reve
 
  1  
Thu 26 Aug, 2004 06:14 am
Like a gaping wound,
The boisterous dug for worms
Pummeling the earth


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hey Ya
 
  1  
Thu 26 Aug, 2004 06:20 am
Pummeling the Earth
is like betraying ourselves
and Humanity.
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firefly
 
  1  
Thu 26 Aug, 2004 06:20 am
Pummeling the earth
We loot our precious resources
Like mad scavengers
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firefly
 
  1  
Thu 26 Aug, 2004 06:24 am
pipped by Hey-

And Humanity
Slumbers on with lofty dreams
Of a world at peace
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drom et reve
 
  1  
Thu 26 Aug, 2004 06:40 am
Of a world at peace,
Ninety percent are at war.
What contradiction!

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