Fainted dead away
I explained the ancient rule
five, seven, five - yeah!
* Haikus are written in a 5-7-5 format. Five syllables in the first line, seven in the second, and five in the third. The first and third lines are generally not identical to one another.
Ah, I see. Thanks. I joined the thread late & didn't read the earlier stuff.
OOps!
five, seven, five - yeah!
Welcome, msolga, get it?
We'd like you to stay!
We'd like you to stay!
A cosy bed is made up,
Lamb curry simmers.
Lamb curry simmers
Comfort food for one alone
Someone to share, please?
Someone to share, please?
All my best laid out for you
Be my guest this night
Be my guest this night
Wondrous youth with tender smile!
In the morning, leave!!
In the morning , leave!
For I owe you nothing more
Don't befriend the dog!
Msolga...
You've written your haiku 5-7-5, not 5-5-7. I think clary means it's in the wrong order. Aside from that, the reverse haiku is lovely. ;-}
Fainted dead away
Ladies are dropping like flies
Prim and proper flop!
Don't befriend the dog
With his prim and proper flop!
Discipline is good
Discipline is good.
Fluffy handcuffs suit Diane.
Kitten with a whip.
Hah, hah, hah--laughing too hard to think of another haiku!!!!!
Kitten with a whip
And its claws blood-tinged, unsheathed!
Who says cats are nice?
Who says cats are nice?
With their gifts of dead mice and
scratched-up furniture
Scratched-up furniture,
Evil slitty eyes, sharp teeth.
Give me a dog! Woof!
Give me a dog! Woof!
A furniture covering
dog, that wags full-time.
Dog, that wags full-time,
Is welcome as sun in spring.
Give him a cuddle!
Give him a cuddle!
Wrap your arms around him now
Give me me a cuddle
Give me a cuddle
I snuggle so very well
Boys love my round shape.
:wink:
Boys love my round shape,
My penetrable white skin.
I am a football!
