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Neverending Haiku chain

 
 
fealola
 
  1  
Tue 20 Jan, 2004 11:16 am
Five foot in her socks
That's four too many feet there
A freak of nature.
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Clary
 
  1  
Tue 20 Jan, 2004 11:33 am
Very Happy
A freak of nature
A nice quiet teenager,
Good politicians.
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msolga
 
  1  
Tue 20 Jan, 2004 02:30 pm
good politicians
Have the gone into hiding?
Name one, I challenge you. Sad
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Diane
 
  1  
Tue 20 Jan, 2004 04:08 pm
Name one, I challenge
You, oxymoron.
Honest politics?
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Clary
 
  1  
Tue 20 Jan, 2004 04:15 pm
Honest politics?
Milit'ry intelligence?
And Microsoft Works?
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larryta2
 
  1  
Tue 20 Jan, 2004 05:15 pm
And Microsoft Works
Word or works, that is question
Play with them all now
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littlek
 
  1  
Tue 20 Jan, 2004 05:18 pm
Play with them all now
They grow up so very fast
Before they're too old
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larryta2
 
  1  
Tue 20 Jan, 2004 05:27 pm
Before they're too old
Kids and grandkids can make you
Old, young, it depends
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Ceili
 
  1  
Tue 20 Jan, 2004 05:49 pm
Old, young, it depends
teenager, senior or child
adults make the grade
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Clary
 
  1  
Wed 21 Jan, 2004 04:55 am
Adults make the grade,
The world, the politics - all.
Kids, too, make a mess.
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kirsten
 
  1  
Wed 21 Jan, 2004 04:19 pm
Kids too, make a mess
Paint & Play-Dough in their hair
Bathtime is a must
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Clary
 
  1  
Wed 21 Jan, 2004 04:21 pm
Bathtime is a must,
Dirty, snotty children who
Play in sticky mud.
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fealola
 
  1  
Wed 21 Jan, 2004 04:50 pm
Play in sticky mud
The Hippo in his glory
Cool, in Africa
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Clary
 
  1  
Wed 21 Jan, 2004 04:51 pm
Cool, in Africa,
The slopes of the Rift Valley
And a gentle breeze.
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fealola
 
  1  
Wed 21 Jan, 2004 04:54 pm
And a gentle breeze
Blows through my open window
Touching my body
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littlek
 
  1  
Wed 21 Jan, 2004 04:54 pm
And a gentle breeze
Stirs up bumps of goose flesh
lull my mind to rest
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Clary
 
  1  
Wed 21 Jan, 2004 04:55 pm
Lull my mind to rest
With Beethoven sonatas.
Let me sleep till noon.
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msolga
 
  1  
Wed 21 Jan, 2004 05:01 pm
Let me sleep till noon?
No, no, no, never!
I'd miss my magic morningS.
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Clary
 
  1  
Wed 21 Jan, 2004 05:03 pm
Olguletkin, those 2 lines are transposed... we've been ever so strict about the 5-7-5 rule!
No, no no, never!
So saying, Lady Bickstaff
Fainted dead away.
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msolga
 
  1  
Wed 21 Jan, 2004 05:19 pm
Clary wrote:
Olguletkin, those 2 lines are transposed... we've been ever so strict about the 5-7-5 rule!


We have?
Gosh! Shocked
You mean I've transposed? Confused
Please enlighten me, Clarykin! Very Happy
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