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Task: What are the causes of juvenile delinquency and what are your solutions?

My writing:
There is a growing tendency for adolescents to break laws and regulations in present-day society. This phenomenon is caused by the following reasons.

To begin with, the unhealthy contents in books, movies and on the Internet play a vital role in youth crime. Teenagers are in their formative period, so if they are exposed to the blood and nudity, they are likely to follow it indiscriminately. Second, owing to the increasing working pressure, parents leave less time and energy to take care of and educate their children. As a consequence, they become apathetic to other people and may even feel guiltless to hurt others. Finally, a great number of schools only focus on students’ academic grades and overlook their personalities and mental health.

Although juvenile delinquency is severe, we should resort to some solutions. First of all, the government must take stringent censorship to limit the violent and pornographic books, movies and the contents on the Internet. For instance, the authority and some companies can join efforts to discover new software which can protect teenagers from the violent and erotic contents. In addition, some parenting school can be established to teach parents how to get a good balance between work and home. Communities ought to hold some activities which can promote the interaction and communication between parents and children. Last but not least, law education must be brought into school education, and teachers must pay more attention to students’ comprehensive growth.

In conclusion, nowadays, our society is plagued with juvenile delinquency. However, the big headache must be addressed by the cooperation among society, school and family.