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People in many countries have been are aware that students have more and more behavior problems in their behavior today. There are several reasons for this phenomenon.

In the first place, it is a reflection of students’ pubescent psychology. Their desire to show their personalities inevitably impels them inevitably to break the school rules and regulations in school. Second, it is easier* for students with low scores than students with good ones to behave badly. In some countries like China, as where teachers show every student's scores or marks of every student in to the whole class, this in all likelihood hurts their self-esteem. What is even worse, most teachers treat students hinging on in accord with their scores，which exert baneful negatively impacts on the student’s psychology and leads to their bad behavior. Lastly, there is a definite link between students’ bad behavior in school and parents’ less care and love at home. Today, single-families are increasing rapidly and more parents are working overtime, so their children may receive less care and love from their parents, which make has a detrimental influence on their children’s behavior in school.

Although the problem is severe, there are still some efforts which we can make things we can do about it. To begin with, schools can employ more psychological teachers to help students with metal problems. Then, teachers must be trained to treat all the students fairly and be told not to show the students’ scores publicly. Additionally, the government ought to set up some parental school so parents can learn how to show love and care to their children even when they are busy.

The students’ mental and psychological diseases lead to their bad behavior. Nevertheless, school, family and the society should make contribution contribute to address this problem.

Second, it is easier* for students with low scores than students with good ones to behave badly.

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There is a tendency for students to be involved in bad behavior in school, and a couple of causes lead to this problem.

In the first place, it is a reflection of students’ pubescent psychology. Their desire to show personality inevitably impels them to break school rules and regulations. Second, teachers’ inappropriate teacher behavior predisposes students to perform badly. In some countries like China, teachers show every student’s scores or marks to the whole class, which in all likelihood hurts student self-esteem. What is even worse, teachers have a strong bias in favor of students with good grades，which negatively impacts students’ psychology and leads to their bad behavior. Lastly, there is a definite link between students’ bad performance in school and less care and love at home. Nowadays, single-families are increasing rapidly and more parents are working overtime. Consequently, their children may receive less care and love from their parents. This also has a detrimental influence on their children’s behavior in school.

Although the problem is severe, there are still some things we can do about it. To begin with, schools should employ more psychological instructors to help students with mental problems. Besides In addition, teachers must be trained to treat all the students fairly and be told not to show the students’ scores publicly. Additionally*, the government ought to set up some parental parenting school, thereby teaching parents to show love and care to their children even when they are busy.

Students’ Bad student behavior affects their study and life, therefore school, family and society should all contribute to address this problem.

（Besides） In addition, teachers must be trained to treat all the students fairly and be told not to show the students’ scores publicly.