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Is the first sentence correct and is the second sentence better?

 
 
Reply Fri 20 Mar, 2009 03:49 am
1. The medicine Jason took stopped him from vomiting.
2. The medicine Jason took stopped Jason's vomiting.

Is the first sentence correct?
Is the second sentence better than the first?

Many thanks.
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Setanta
 
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Reply Fri 20 Mar, 2009 04:17 am
@tanguatlay,
Both sentences are correct. I see no reason that one sentence would be preferable to the other. The first sentence would more likely be the form a native speaker of English would use--although one might more likely write: The medicine Jason took stopped his vomiting.
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solipsister
 
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Reply Fri 20 Mar, 2009 04:32 am
@tanguatlay,
2. is way wrong the second jason should be his

JASON STOPPED VOMITING AFTER HE TOOK THE MEDICINE

was it advisable that he stop vomiting?
tanguatlay
 
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Reply Fri 20 Mar, 2009 04:40 am
@solipsister,
Hi Solipsister

2. The medicine Jason took stopped his (not Jason's) vomiting.

It was a careless mistake. Thanks for pointing that out.
Setanta
 
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Reply Fri 20 Mar, 2009 04:43 am
Sentence two was not incorrect, it simply was a little awkward, but it was not incorrect. As has been pointed out now more than once, the locution "stopped his vomiting" is probably more likely to be used by a native speaker of English.
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solipsister
 
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Reply Fri 20 Mar, 2009 04:43 am
@tanguatlay,
tang, old fruit, forget grammar try and make it punchy

oh and i wanna know more about the jason story ie why he should be stopped from vomiting
contrex
 
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Reply Fri 20 Mar, 2009 05:34 am
@solipsister,
Solipsister's posts are very often less than helpful, Tanguatlay, and I advise you to treat them with a great deal of caution, or better still ignore them.
solipsister
 
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Reply Fri 20 Mar, 2009 05:50 am
@contrex,
Contrex's posts are very often less than helpful, Tanguatlay, and I advise you to treat them with disdain because he answers your questions without advice on other aspects of the writing.
contrex
 
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Reply Fri 20 Mar, 2009 06:35 am
@solipsister,
See what I mean?
tanguatlay
 
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Reply Fri 20 Mar, 2009 08:34 am
@contrex,
Yes, Contrex, I find Solipsister's reply confusing. I'm getting confused by her sentences which are often not punctuated. And she asked why Jason should be stopped from vomiting. I don't understand the question at all. I thought the sentence was self-explanatory.
Lightwizard
 
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Reply Fri 20 Mar, 2009 11:12 am
@tanguatlay,
Both are correct, but the second should be written:

The medicine Jason took stopped his vomiting.



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contrex
 
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Reply Fri 20 Mar, 2009 05:53 pm
@tanguatlay,
Solipsister appears to be a textbook example of a forum "troll". These people are lonely souls and are often "clients of the mental health services". That last phrase is an example of euphemism.
tanguatlay
 
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Reply Fri 20 Mar, 2009 09:49 pm
@contrex,
Thanks, Lightwizard and Contrex.
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