correction of letter

Please correct the following letter for me. Many thanks.

Currently I am working for Sainsbury's in the position of code controller. The nature of this work matches my abilities, and I am very satisfied with the terms and conditions which the company has presented me.

However, because of personal circumstances, it is necessary for me to move to northwest London next month, where I would like to be transferred. I notice that the nearest Sainsbury's branches are at Finchley Road, Wilesden Green, Alperton and South Harrow.

I would be happy to work at any of these locations, and I very much hope that you will consider my request positively.

Yours sincerely,