Fri 12 Dec, 2003 08:17 pm - I told you not to look...
sleep unto a world
of dark and utter despair
lives unfolded
on a page of crumbs
and ink of tears
fold these passions
tear these lines
grim saught... (view)
Fri 12 Dec, 2003 07:09 pm - wow, thats deep. very awesome, especially for a first post =) no need to be nervous, this isn't the school of hard Knocks ok? anyways, have a great day, keep posting =).... (view)
Fri 12 Dec, 2003 07:02 pm - dreamy boy ;) good job, however i have one suggestion about writing technique: try not to add a line just to make it rhyme, I'm not saying that you did, but in some ways it almost appears that... (view)
Thu 27 Nov, 2003 12:11 pm - I have my reasons for copy writing, (i don't think i have to explain the details) i was in another forum that even did it automaticly every time I posted a write, and mainly i think it is a... (view)
Tue 25 Nov, 2003 05:44 pm - oh yeah, almost forgot...Dysfunctional, i'm sorry, but i think you need to get a grip before you decide to vent out your feelings on other people's writing. what you have to say is... (view)
Tue 25 Nov, 2003 05:26 pm - oh my gosh...this is just...awesome!!!!!!!!!! i love it!!!!!! *freaks out* woah this is just great. =) ok, i'll shut up now...thank you so much for sharing this. peace.
- Rain (view)
Mon 24 Nov, 2003 10:47 pm - and for a little while, here i thought i had the most insanity in the world, and now you guys steal it away from me!!! not fair!!!...by the way, about that blow up sheep... lol.... (view)
