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To cinnamon with pain:

 
 
kerver
 
Reply Tue 2 Dec, 2003 01:54 pm
You know who you are: (I only hope you have the nerve to come back in here and read this)

You crawled into my head
Where you don't belong
I shouldn't have said anything
But still, you were wrong
You took my thoughts
and twisted them so
you disrespected me
You did you know
I feel so violated, mad with rage
Do you deserve me
I'm a rat in your cage
believe what you want,
You will anyway
But my thoughts are my delusions
So stay away
If you wanna get to know me better
You should gain my respect
but i don't know if thats possible
I might reject
Rational I will be
but the trust is gone
What am I going to do
You were wrong.


"cinnamon is sweet, but it's not the only spice in the cupboard"
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Wed 3 Dec, 2003 06:23 am
I so wish I knew who cinnamon was kerver. I'd kick his ass for you, you sweet thing, you. Wink
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Shajahan
 
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Reply Sat 6 Dec, 2003 01:48 am
A rat expects respect from its prey
And offered rejection as a means of disrespect...

who is the prey of whom?
the rat or the cinnamon?

good reading.....

thanks.......
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drom et reve
 
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Reply Sat 6 Dec, 2003 09:14 am
cavfancier wrote:
I so wish I knew who cinnamon was kerver. I'd kick his ass for you, you sweet thing, you. Wink


I do; what an asshole for not trusting you! Well, maybe you and I should go 'round and take things into our own hands... then sell it to the Fox network:

The Odd Couple II: The Revenge

I can hear 'Golden Globe.' Laughing
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Rain
 
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Reply Sun 7 Dec, 2003 10:05 pm
I like this, it's a good vent and it would make a groovy song if you wanted it to. =)

- Rain
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donteatpants
 
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Reply Fri 12 Dec, 2003 12:18 am
awesome, seriously...
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kerver
 
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Reply Fri 12 Dec, 2003 12:25 am
Thank you....Thank you all.
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