Reply Sat 20 Dec, 2003 09:52 pm
I can see the rain
It's cold and wet on my skin
Like how I feel within
I am obssessed with understanding
I can't let it go
If I don't escape my mind it will blow
I need to accept that there are things
I won't know
I need to bring peace back to my thoughts
I need to remember it was balance that I
was taught
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kerver
 
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Reply Mon 22 Dec, 2003 02:12 pm
I need to do the same thing d-shade! Nice work.
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Rain
 
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Reply Fri 26 Dec, 2003 06:43 pm
very nice =) i espcially like this one, lol. Smile
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bgryan
 
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Reply Thu 1 Jan, 2004 02:48 pm
rain
Well wrote, you are right, the secret is the 'balance'!
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darkshade
 
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Reply Thu 1 Jan, 2004 05:58 pm
Thanks all, I appreciate it.
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cusick
 
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Reply Mon 5 Jan, 2004 08:06 am
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This is sad, It is not easy to keep balanced in the world today. Maggie
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darkshade
 
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Reply Wed 7 Jan, 2004 02:36 pm
I agree cusick, I think that part of the problem with the troubles in the world is the lack of a drive for some sort of balance. I am glad to see that others recognize balance as important too.
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