scarlet bubble

This is a poem I wrote a couple days ago... I hoe you guys like it. I'm really nervous this is my first post on this whole place

Okay, well, any comments, friendly critisism or encouragement is really appreciated...

have a nice day!


we're standing in this scarlet bubble
no one can touch us no one can save us
but that's the way we want it
cause we won't be here much longer
as the blackness grows stronger

your eyes are a black flame
your skin a tainted white
nothing ever stays the same
thats why we always have to fight

this blackness doesn't engulf me
all the darkness sets me free
the anger and the hatred
has tainted all our purity

no one can tell your hurting
but for all those bracelets on your wrist
did you think i wowoudn'tee through that facade, darling?
sucking in your bloody oxygen
wishing someone would make it end
the lunchroom has never been so empty
the teacher has never been so blind
the halls have never been so quiet
death has never been so kind

loneliness is overwhelming
swallowing teens on its deadly parade
walking next to the cliques in the hallways
so no one knows your alone...always

ever had that feeling that everyone is looking at u
youits aa lotbetter feeling then the one you get...
when you know no one has ever looked at you

you walk into kids in the halls
just so they'll look in your eyes
but they hold on tight to their books
and press through
oh god, they never saw you

how many stars are in the sky?
not enough to wish on...
how many ladybugs have caught your eye?
not enough to wish on...

those wishes, dear never did come true
the pain, dear, really did seep through
and though they know your the kid
that was in the hospital
they notice you
they pity you
they whisper about you
the poor, sh*tty you

its about time it ended
too many scars yet to be mended