Re: correct preposition
Yoong Liat wrote:He was looking for some old cartridges which gamekeepers used in their shotguns to hunt for game.
Is 'in' the correct preposition, is the sentence fine or should it be rephrased?
Many thanks.
I would change it to, "The son of a bitch wanted to kill something and he searched for anything resembling a bullet which he could place into the chamber of his gun. He was drunk -- drunk and horny -- he figured if he killed something real quick like and handed it to the bitch by the stream, well, then he might get some action, but, for now, the most important thing wast to secure the bullets.
Try that.
Is this a test?
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