I'm with fresco--wince and discard.
Quote:(Yes, this is a letter of motivation, I know it doesn't sound like one but I am going somewhere with this). I had applied to so many institutions during my matric year, making UCT the last place on my mind. I received a letter from UCT in 2005 saying that I had been offered an entrance scholarship to study anything in the humanities faculty. I suddenly remembered I had applied to UCT in 2004 and decided to do a BA in film and media studies and it's a decision I have regretted (so far).
Your school was my last choice. I have regretted this choice. Therefore I deserve one of the limited places in an advanced course.
I'm going to waffle and ramble and do things my way. Don't expect me to be organized. I've had many wonderful opportunities and I deserve some more.
So there!
Quote:There's no need to impress you with superfluous words, which don't exist in my vocabulary. I'll let my short letter speak for itself. I'm not going to overcompensate for something by writing a long letter (like some people might do). If I'm meant to get chosen, I will get chosen.
I'm not going to work on my prose style. I'm better than people who actually sweat over writing applications. I have a Good Self Image and this trumps hard work.
Read, wince and discard.