1
   

it is me again. end

 
 
Reply Thu 26 Apr, 2007 07:37 am
  • Topic Stats
  • Top Replies
  • Link to this Topic
Type: Discussion • Score: 1 • Views: 661 • Replies: 4
No top replies

 
boomerang
 
  1  
Reply Thu 26 Apr, 2007 11:08 am
I like beautiful things.
0 Replies
 
zck1985463
 
  1  
Reply Thu 26 Apr, 2007 06:25 pm
boomerang wrote:
I like beautiful things.

i have a different idea in 'drawn'
i understand it as ' i am perfect'
0 Replies
 
stuh505
 
  1  
Reply Thu 26 Apr, 2007 06:43 pm
Let me improve upon the punctuation of the original sentence, because it is really bad.

Quote:
"I am, well...classical-- as if drawn by perfection to some magnetic, Platonic pole; idealism, and beauty's, true North."


* The ellipses indicates pause
* The usage of -- is largely open but experience suggests it fits here
* The comma between magnetic and Platonic separates coordinating adjectives
* The semicolon links the two independent clauses
* The comma around "and beauty's" separates this parenthetical element. I am not sure if, technically, "Idealism" should be made possessive as well but it certainly reads better without.

Quote:
i have a different idea in 'drawn'
i understand it as ' i am perfect'


If the quote had said, "...as if drawn by the hand of God," then draw would have the meaning you indicate. But here, it does not. Here it means attracted to. The author is trying to say that he is a "classical person," and he defines classical to mean that he strives for idealism. He considers this beautiful, as evidenced by the wordplay on him calling it true north in reference to the poles of the Earth. He adds the word platonic in there to indicate that he is not talking about a phallic pole -- eg, a penis -- which is of course not necessary, because nobody was thinking about the penis until he said that.
0 Replies
 
zck1985463
 
  1  
Reply Thu 26 Apr, 2007 07:03 pm
stuh505
your illustration is very detailed
thank you
if you need more context, please go to
http://www.able2know.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=95073
in fact, i post all the context there.
0 Replies
 
 

Related Topics

deal - Question by WBYeats
Let pupils abandon spelling rules, says academic - Discussion by Robert Gentel
Please, I need help. - Question by imsak
Is this sentence grammatically correct? - Question by Sydney-Strock
"come from" - Question by mcook
concentrated - Question by WBYeats
 
  1. Forums
  2. » it is me again. end
Copyright © 2024 MadLab, LLC :: Terms of Service :: Privacy Policy :: Page generated in 0.03 seconds on 10/06/2024 at 07:02:30