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help with thesis statement...

 
 
Reply Mon 19 Mar, 2007 04:24 pm
ok...i am starting out on my 7 page essay (T.T), need some comment on my thesis...

my topic is about how language has a impact on the environment

Thesis statment:

Language is a living organism that has a symbiosis relationship with human and their environment

I think its too general isnt it... should i narrow it down a little bit more?
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fresco
 
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Reply Mon 19 Mar, 2007 04:35 pm
Quote:
Language is a living organism that has a symbiotic relationship with humans and their environment


With those corrections I think that is fine as a thesis even though I might not agree with it.
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englishnewb
 
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Reply Mon 19 Mar, 2007 11:32 pm
why dont u agree with it?
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fresco
 
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Reply Tue 20 Mar, 2007 01:50 am
I disagree because "living" and "symbiotic" imply same level operations when in essence language appears to be a priori.
http://www.able2know.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=1119&highlight=
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englishnewb
 
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Reply Tue 20 Mar, 2007 02:47 am
o wait... theres a quote in your thread saying that humans kind evolved is because of language.... good quote
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