the wolf... translated story

hi all,
I have translated this story as a homework and I want please your opinion of it. I don't know the end of the story so please forgive me, but I want you to comment on the language..

the wolf

The wood animals froze and stared with horror at the wolf as he descended the mountain and reached the forest. The parrot stopped cawing, and the birds trembled.
The wolf chose a place close to them; he smiled and waved his hand greeting them. This scene caused a lot of muttering and movements, but the wolf paid no attention. He waved his tail and took a turn about the place until he found a rock between some trees, just near the stream. There where he settled and began planning for his new home.
The wolf was so noisily engrossed building his house that he made a huge cloud of dust. Then he pulled out small trees and grass to clean the area. The work was going on while animals were getting together cautiously, whispering to each other.
Within two hours, the wolf was done with the pre-building work, so he jumped quickly to the forest to get some wood to prepare for his new dwelling.
When he disappeared among trees, the anxious animals drew closer to each other, and the first audible voice was the parrot's.
"Wolf… Wolf…Wolf!" he shouted.
His words made all the wary animals wince and disappear in a flash, except the turtle, who walked as slowly as ever, encouraging other animals to come back.
"Come on.. It's just the parrot… Come on.. We must discuss this serious matter," she said with a faint voice.
The rabbit was the first to be assured by the turtle's words and, with an acrobatic feat, he was on top of the turtle's shell.
Then, everybody else came: hedgehogs, rats, squirrels and birds of different kinds. The deer also came, batting her beautiful eyes, and took a place alongside a flock of pigeons. Then, ducks and geese came swaying and shaking off their wet feathers to dry them. The monkey, though late, was not to miss this important event. Taking his usual way of transportation by jumping from one branch to the other, and he joined the others. The last one to come was the fox. He showed up wagging his tale and his eyes shining slyly.
When the turtle was sure that everyone was there, she spoke:
"We have been living here peacefully and quietly for a long time. Each one of us knows his rights and carries on his duties, but this new arrival… the wolf."
The parrot interrupted again: "Wolf… Wolf…Wolf!", and they all looked around, then laughed.
The deer shyly suggested: "We don't want him here. It's our land."
Birds seemed to be pleased by her words and waved their wings in agreement.
The squirrel added: "We must think carefully before we come to a decision".
The monkey said bravely: "Well, I have no fear of this wolf, yet I agree. We must cooperate",
But the fox had a different opinion: "Oh, calm down fellows.. The wolf is an animal.. just like us.. and he's kind too. Haven't you seen him when he waved his hand to greet us? He's come here to live with us peacefully".
This suggestion set off an uproar that the parrot shouted once more as he did before:
"Wolf… Wolf…Wolf!"
The mention of this animal's name made them silent again, so the turtle took the opportunity and continued: "The wolf is a great danger to all of us, and we shall not believe you fox; and I can prove to you how wicked your peaceful wolf is".
"Really! And how, you crawling boss?!" the fox replied mockingly.
"Put a piece of meat on the rock he has chosen" the turtle said wisely. "and when he comes back and starts eating, go , you brave fox, and try to share it with him. Try it, and you'll see."
A noise began with some chickens' remark: "We eat cereals", geese supported "so do we", and pigeons flied to agree with their partners, while rabbits gathered and began to champ grass, and the monkey handed a banana to the parrot.
They all stopped for a while when the turtle spoke: "Wolves love themselves and only themselves. They fight each other for food. We'll work together to banish him". Then she turned away and said: " Come with me to our meeting area, there, we are going to put a plan to get rid of this intruder."