lol
Blazer will get his face slit with a diamond cut razor//
I'll make you eat your own ****, like a dog with neutered genitalia//
My lyrics will rape-ya, so blazer do u want some?//
I'll leave you lyrically blisted and molested like billy jacobs mum//
Your a cum dumpster for no teethe paedophiles, cause of being a naive insecure juvenile//
Im as ill as stomach bile, you have a hopeless rap style//
Ill hit your wack ass with exact lyrical contact that spiritually cracks the skeleton growin in ur hunch-back//
When will u stop faking?, I sussed you out your a rock spider in the making// (rockspider - paedophile)
Ill choke-ya like the first bong from a non-smoker//
I didn't take the bait, I went straight for the poacher//
this to A riz
A riz? nah more like C jiz (see jiz/cum), right before yo menz cock spits spunk
up in yo mouth, he slam dunk you swallow it down,
for that **** you regurgitate i got spermicide and evil spits,
leave you in a nervous state with bloody clothes n tha shits,
in a muddy hole called the pits, keep suckin fo cash,
coz yo rhymes get smashed n gashed,
you might me black but you still cant rap,
so fall the **** back youre whack,
im runnin dese raps like i woz pacs personal trainer,
aint a bitch insaner im da dominator reighner,
so whos the best? **** thats a no brainer,
hit back at yo chest wit a whole container,
leave you so fucked up yo whole body need a retainer,
more metal than robocop so **** gettin thru customs,
wont settle for wot u got so i erupt n bust em,
racist? taste this in case you missed the jist,
of me bein pissed, im a fuckin "whitie"
spread luv like aphrodite,
i bled blood like many yet im mighty,
and god help anyone who will try n smite me,
i wipe thee offa the earth and offa the verse
offer a curse to youre whole family,
coz your takin a whole race from face value n tryna damage it,
know you'll never manage it coz i savage n ravage spits
On RD L.As got beef wid some Crew who think they all tough with there Gay rhymes and 46 posts -_-"
SOO I let them have a piece of my mind: and now im showin it to You guys!
Da Profiled Is a 'broken Shredder' they basicly 'Rippin'-None'
Lil touch calims we at 'war' but even with 'pistols' they wouldnt be 'spittin Guns'
With every weak bar you 'Pack-I-stand/pakistan' Like we doin a 'bombin' LAs 'Hit-N-run!'
Gettin your ass jealous with all the points 'I rack/iraq'- Up! You aint nuttin but wack-Fucks!
Like 'sex durin a war' 'bombin' down on ya 'Barraks' You have no 'Protection' Yall seemin to 'Slack-Up!'
'Education durin battle'? im 'Schoolin' you 'kidd', take 'notes' Cuz im the 'Teacher-of-this-****'
Lemme ask: 'Who sane/hussian' in ya crew? only way you CAN win is havin a
terrioist 'Leader-in-ya-cliqe!'
Like Spine Shark goin' 'home handicapped' when i lyricly leave his Skill-in-crutches
A 'boxing arena' He needed 'protection' thas why he walkin around with 'Pillow-punches!'
You 'jackin off in war' Boii?! why you 'Commin'/cummin' up to me talkin'-****?
leave you in the 'E.R' room after i 'Wrecked him/rectum' and he gon' need a fuckin 'Walkin-Stick!'
Your disses dont affect me! im 'immune' to them, I laugh when i see the 'Wrath-of-you'
And dont even think Da profiled gon' back you up! I already Murked 'HALF-THEY-CREW!'
Now shark said he gon' drop a bomb..but dude im murkin you 1 vs. 4 it aint even Fair-,man
**** that! aint no one needs to 'Arm-me/army' Ill murder these fuckers with my bare-hands!
Im a 'Karate marine' Dude you crazy if you think you can
'challenge-this-vet'
You havent 'Damaged-me-yet!' throw u back in da E.R, but this time they gotta 'Manage-his-neck!'
PeAcE SuCkErS!!!
RaTe It
MCS in the house today
Gonna lay the smackdown on Hitman J
Your style is sick, and I mean the bad way
Don't f*ck with me or I'll blow you away
I see the MC's talking lots of sh*t
Think they can fly with the best of it
Me and my guitar ain't havin none o this
Cuz I'll melt your face off and make you trip
Hitman J? Sounds like Bret Hart
You're just as decrepid as that old fart
I'm sure you roll around with sweaty men too
Keep f*ckin' wit' me and I'll powerbomb you!
Ungh!
Keepin it fresh says the whack MC
I say keep it real, shake yo asses for me
Ungh!
Keepin it fresh says the n*ggas in the back
I say keep it real, let me see that crack
You guys think you're hip cuz you write about the dead?
You're running your mouths like a chicken with no head
Whatcha gonna do when everything's been said?
By the way, Hitman, your mom is good in bed
*orgasm sound effect*
Ungh!
Keepin it fresh says the whack MC
I say keep it real, shake yo asses for me
Ungh!
Keepin it fresh says the n*ggas in the back
I say keep it real, let me see that crack
Word.
Yo MCS representin' the 519 in the Great White North
Biggie Lives Forever yo
Shanster Out
d-d-d-danger...
Forget paper~listen to the way I spit flows/
So sick it's though I had the flu and stripped throat/
No-tice how I'm "droppin' lyrics" like strip clothes/
Holdin' nothin' back just to let these fools know/
I spit cold~Listen to the flow I pocess/
Though I spit nothin' but jewels~I'm takin' u for your chest/
Nigeria's best/
Its like I've got this game picket-fenced/
Im a Soldier to the grave~I play all day never bench/
With a microphone clench I'm a hungry MC/
Treat this game like a dish~Egusi soup and Garri/
Underground so I really don't watch TV/
Though the way I think up flows its like a D-V-D/
"Hear me gleam" /
Its like I cough up diamond rings/
I'm sure to bring the "sunshine" just like "Anderson" sings/
Deeply obsessed with that sound that goes "Ching-ching"/
But its not Ms. Jada, Timberland or Missy/
Address me~As that Kid that makes most en-vy/
I've got flows plenty/
For some reason I know God sent me/
To empt-y~my music legendar-y/
Like a nigguh tryin' to piss out cran-berry~"juice"/
Just like Tupac~this u can't stop/
callin out whose a citizen to Hip-Hop
-1- peace out manoozy blood hit sumin out yh...
Lyrical acroba-tics~packaged in schema-tics~that leave this SHANSTER 20 guy drama-tic like addict-diseased Ho's/
this cats is"washed-up" like laundry-mat latino-s/
Cappu-chi-nos~r "hotter" than u/
U're a thousand feet "below the air" I breathe~So I'm forced to see~this fool with a "birds-eye view"/
ICU will know u on a first name basis/
While your medical case shows traces~of mental anguish/
Making me the reason~u're skull is un-even~in an operating room for a sectional brain-stitch/
While my aims are 180 degreez~My Vocab-ular-y is Double Jointed/
Annointed lyrical schemes~that provoke this weak-hearted net mceez/
To speak ahead of his thoughts~only to get caught in my bullet's spree/
Seems like my absence from this site has invited the foolish/
To seize the oppurtunity and str8 abuse it/
So I'm back with my version of "Ether"~killin' that noise of a "Takeover" movement/
Comin' at Manoozy stupid~is highly not advised/
Cuz ambulance lights will be needed to escort~your body attatched to breast chords~and a broken spine/
carnt be arsed to write essay lol... hitman stab him for not only tryin to insult ya but doin a **** job as it aswell lol ooo yeah i looked at ya peace above hotman blood it good loads of earthquake punches in it, cleaver word play,,, it sick drop ... ... safe danger ma nigger... blood!!! -1- peace out
lmao you said rate it! so here we go!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hitman J wrote:On RD L.As got beef wid some Crew who think they all tough with there Gay rhymes and 46 posts -_-"
SOO I let them have a piece of my mind: and now im showin it to You guys!
Da Profiled Is a 'broken Shredder' they basicly 'Rippin'-None'
Lil touch calims we at 'war' but even with 'pistols' they wouldnt be 'spittin Guns'
lmfao, Gunplays' wack as ****, doesn't hit hard at all, and it's text so no matter how you flip it, It's not gonna hit!
With every weak bar you 'Pack-I-stand/pakistan' Like we doin a 'bombin' LAs 'Hit-N-run!'
Gettin your ass jealous with all the points 'I rack/iraq'- Up! You aint nuttin but wack-****!
Like 'sex durin a war' 'bombin' down on ya 'Barraks' You have no 'Protection' Yall seemin to 'Slack-Up!'
I'm guesin' this whole bar and half is your'e 'one bar' right? all three lines are a punch with some wordplay in it, really simple wordplay.. these are just stupid man.. c'mon. punch after punch, with no setup??? how is anyof this hittin man?! and you're wordin' it way off to pull off some of this wordplay man.. lmfao.. step it up!
'Education durin battle'? im 'Schoolin' you 'kidd', take 'notes' Cuz im the 'Teacher-of-this-****'
Lemme ask: 'Who sane/hussian' in ya crew? only way you CAN win is havin a
terrioist 'Leader-in-ya-cliqe!'
this was actually pretty decent man, the punch and setup had alittle bit of a conncetion, and the punch was pretty cool.. If you worded it bettter it would have been a nice punch.. but you're multies are off... teacher of this ****/leader in ya clique, only words that rhyme are leader/teacher and ****/clique, the other words just throw off the flow and multie of thepunch... to be considered a multie everyword has to rhyme. like
"I'm soo sick, fUcc I rap best with hits...
don't **** with cleanin, but I cat swept this bitch..." the four end words are multies "rap/cat.....best/swept.....with/this....hits/bitch" see waht I mean..
Like Spine Shark goin' 'home handicapped' when i lyricly leave his Skill-in-crutches
A 'boxing arena' He needed 'protection' thas why he walkin around with 'Pillow-punches!'
lol.. JUST BECUASE YOU DO THIS 'WORD-WORD-WORD' DOESNT make it a multie... lol.. only words that rhyme were 'crutches/punches' lmfao.. but the concept of the punch has been done and flipped way better thatn this...
You 'jackin off in war' Boii?! why you 'Commin'/cummin' up to me talkin'-****?
leave you in the 'E.R' room after i 'Wrecked him/rectum' and he gon' need a **** 'Walkin-Stick!'
Your disses dont affect me! im 'immune' to them, I laugh when i see the 'Wrath-of-you'
And dont even think Da profiled gon' back you up! I already Murked 'HALF-THEY-CREW!'
Now shark said he gon' drop a bomb..but dude im murkin you 1 vs. 4 it aint even Fair-,man
**** that! aint no one needs to 'Arm-me/army' Ill murder these **** with my bare-hands!
Im a 'Karate marine' Dude you crazy if you think you can
'challenge-this-vet'
You havent 'Damaged-me-yet!' throw u back in da E.R, but this time they gotta 'Manage-his-neck!'
PeAcE SuCkErS!!!
RaTe It
blah, the other **** was just to wack to break down... sorry man, you need to work harder or just quit.. I'm bein' as real as any real writer would be towards someonel ike you man.... wordplay = you have potential.. just pick wordplay that hasn't been done before, all you'res is simple and done way before you're time... and multies work on that ****.... quit with the '''''''' ****, looks newbish.. and quit with ------------ that too..
take it or leave it...
iigh thanks for the Real feedback..
yo hit...is rd down or somethin?
Man, I'll drop you, kill you, make your next taxi cab a hearse
And don't be afraid if I curse,
But this guy is so gay, he be rockin lipstick, and a purse
About to turn and burst
You can beat him, Hitman, but let me get a hit in first
Man you rocking more colors than the inside of a bag of starbursts
And when I rap, it looks like a fire burst
If you need some inspiration, look at my style first
And go ahead and diss me, don't look down on the internet,
Because you know that's where you and your girlfriend met
This dude can't act on his words, but he's full of threats
So fat, he couldn't fit into his circle sweats
He can go first, watch him squirm, and circumvent
Why doesn't it make you feel bad, your mama won't cry after your death
And I rap you so quick, You have to pause to catch your breath
Now brace yourself, lay off the booze, your gonna lose
Leave rap, go to blues, it won't even make the news
And you never needed an excuse to confuse lyrics with rap abuse
Need a minute to change you artist Views, I'm your muse
I'll leave you to snooze, convered in bruises, and chick tattoos
Die from bad lyric overuse without enough blood to transfuse
Forget this stuff, skittles out, you can tape me leaving
So you don't forget this battle, when your disbelieving
Looks like the best one here is Danger.
C'mon, somebody challenge me.
hehehe...the best one here is danger....thas funny kid.^^
nuttin against danger
yo hitman...is RD down or something?
littleskittle... you like that last drop then yeah...
nah i think the best in here gotta be manoozy i knw hitman got his whole things goin on but manoozy down to track lyrics better than anyone here easly that my view...
^^^ PHEW quietstorm!!
damn i thought it was only MY comp. but i think RD is down...cuz i cant get on it
I only saw the last page... so...
yea....me 2...atleast now i kno its not only me.....
Duke RD is back on now...and im battlin Invince
betcha ill loose but i might not
