Neverending Rap Battle III

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Yea so im back an better than i was before
So i hope everybody here is ready for more
Even though they thought they could cut me off like eminem
I come back, cuz every fourth quater, i like to mike jordan em
I stay on my crooked path man, i never stray
And when i rap im like a brick wall , never gonna sway
So clear the way for me, cuz im here to stay

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dude you rock hard on RD, why you back to your old style on here?

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ight so is this whole thing ova the vote 4 the hitman eryk battle settled or what

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umm..proff voted tie and i think danger voted for me.....

so that 2-0 me...I THINK idk ill have to go back..

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o ight well that fighting was mad stupid though

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ne one wanna battle im sooo bored

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yo check it

I'll get on the mic to prohit you to speak
I'll be steppin up just to exhibit my street
comin in here I'll inhibit your streak
I'm givin you a treat when I'm flowin to this beat
like your bitch takin my meat when Im makin her skeet
and you notice it's kinda neat how I flow to this beat
my style stays kinda unique now it go's gaining mystique
I stay on my feet, when Im droppin my heat
it's not even a feat, you're easy to defeat
Although battlein me is like recieving a promotion
cause it's turning eyes at you when O.B. makes a comotion
consider this a demotion, your **** just lacks in emotion
I got this notion, tonight you better grab some hand lotion
cause your girls comin over to my place
soon as she sees me and falls in love with my face
Obnoxious steppin up with style and grace
I'm just talkin **** over the music and bass

Not directed at anyone really, I'm just bored. And I think Hitman won the last battle as far as total votes. 'cept for the one against me. Anyway's good job Hitman, Eryk is kind of a whiny douchebag though so my opinion is biased.

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yo obnoxious i aint got nothin agianst u but u betta chill wit that gettin on eryk **** cuz he my homeboy here

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Oh yeah he iz almost forgot....well no hate dude but your homie needs to know when to stop runnin his mouth.

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Whoa whoa whoa.. Okay this is what I saw...

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judging fairly on the battle

multies: hitman, I saw maybe one multie on eryks
personals: eryk although he overused the name jokes
flow: hitman, but it was very close
punches: eryk, hitman had a couple but they were mostly defensive
enjoyment: hitman, he seemed to describe you to t with the instruction handbook line

overall : hitman, and thats excluding your douchebag points.

First off.. Flow and multies don't win battles.. Multies are to help emphasize your verse.. To make it better, and more complex. Judging a battle on multies is wrong.. That's like putting this bar up against one of your punches that U feel strong against:
"Yo.. Realz is elite.. cap bitches.. I'm so hood-when-I-write,
Cuhz' when I'm spitting .. U can tell I'm good-with-the-mic.."

Thurr ain't no punch there.. multies.. but.. it's not stating anything.. this is a BATTLE. In war.. do people stand there and brag about how big their guns are? Um.. I don't think so.. It dun' matter how many multies U got.. How big they are.. If it's not punching nothing.. Why are U basing a battle on that.. It's not topic. If U guys don't wanna' give this site a bad name.. U gotta' start judging **** fair.. Flow and multies aren't everything.

I don't mean to hate but...

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judging fairly on the battle
Okay.. Readin what U put.. I dun' think so

multies: hitman, I saw maybe one multie on eryks
Okay.. True.
personals: eryk although he overused the name jokes
Hmm.. personals yes.. Name jokes.. I see U on that one.
flow: hitman, but it was very close
Ok.. very close U say?
punches: eryk, hitman had a couple but they were mostly defensive
Oh.. True true..
enjoyment: hitman, he seemed to describe you to t with the instruction handbook line
Your enjoyment's your enjoyment

overall : hitman, and thats excluding your douchebag points.
Eazyyy there.. U check on that right?

Now.. Let's review.

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judging fairly on the battle

multies: hitman, I saw maybe one multie on eryks
1 For Hit 0 For Eryk
personals: eryk although he overused the name jokes
0 For Hit 1 For Eryk (1-1)
flow: hitman, but it was very close
1 For Hit 1 For Eryk - U said close (2-2)
punches: eryk, hitman had a couple but they were mostly defensive
0 For Hit 1 For Eryk -(2-3)
enjoyment: hitman, he seemed to describe you to t with the instruction handbook line
1 For Hit 0 For Eryk (3-3)

overall : hitman, and thats excluding your douchebag points.
Overall.. U gotta' judge overall.. Not on the structure.. In the flow.. U said it was very close.. U have to consider that Eryk was very close with the flow.. But U are taking it like.. whoever's name is beside those colons will take the battle.. That's not always the case.. What if U battled me.. I took the Structure category, metas etc.. Buh U were very close and had punches on me.. Yes.. I took more categories.. But if U were close in the other categories.. I don't think that'd be fair to U.

Okay.. I don't wanna' sound like a bitch lol.. Buh' U gotta' be non-biased and "Vote on the Art, Not the Artist" .. So check yourselves.

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FR U wanna battle? i want to see if i could beat you...it'll be like old times.. Very Happy

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breaking down the judgement... that was interesting but I guess I just have to agree with you. But even then I still give the win to Hitman just because name jokes can only carry you so far. Plus he makes disses on Hitmans name and talks about wanting to inherit his name in the same verse. I'm new to this site so I'm not really friends with anyone, so I judged it as I saw fit. And Dj quick kid sorry for dissin on your homie but even a friend can tell when another friend acts like a douche.

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so im confused now...waz tha score? do i have 2 votes?

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I believe you have only one vote, hitman.

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breaking down the judgement... that was interesting but I guess I just have to agree with you. But even then I still give the win to Hitman just because name jokes can only carry you so far. Plus he makes disses on Hitmans name and talks about wanting to inherit his name in the same verse. I'm new to this site so I'm not really friends with anyone, so I judged it as I saw fit. And Dj quick kid sorry for dissin on your homie but even a friend can tell when another friend acts like a douche.

Okay.. All U had to do.. Wah tell it like that.. How is someone supposed to know that U didn't like the way they had nameplay.. U gotta' give more indepth feedback.. Cuhz' that's the reason why U come onto these forums in the first place.. To get better. Just make sure.. Next time U come through.

And Hitman.. Yeh I'm down.. I just forget about this forum err'now and then. So if I dun' show it's cuhz' I'm busy or forgot.. Buh I guess I'll be on.
Rules?

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man... dats why no 1 wanna vote. why u got to break down every line to vote...4get it im not gonna vote then... and Eryk dont tll me to shut the fucc up... u dont know me.... ill murk u now. ask hit... dnt cuss at ppl u dont know nothin about

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Well.. At least give a detailed explanation.. It'll better the emcees, both, and U.. Then U dun' gotta' go through all this ish.. With complaints and whatnot.

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iight fo-realz here how it ogin down

48hrs (2days) to check in and drop
6 bars max
no recyclin
ppl vote like:

flow:
punches:
multies:
enjoyment:
overral:

OR bar-by-bar, iight?

and eryk...yes im afraid quiet will crush your ass....thas just my 2 cents 2 Cents

lol

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Eyy.. I'm the best and U heard, don't even try to be testing my words,
Cuhz' it's obvious emcees ain't gettin' the respect they deserve...
What happened to just spitting.. Just spitting to be in it?
Now cats taking the net beef to heart.. Bruh' U know there's a limit.
See, I spit just in spirit, knowing ya'llz will see it and hear it,
Expressing my shiit with emotions, shown through my lyrics.
Business... faultyness is spread through words and tha' letters,
Does it really matter? In tha' end, a win.. Does it make U better?
It's whateva'. Putting so much effort in something so little to prove,
Spitting, U lose? Ey.. U gotta take it or leave it, it's gitting U through.
Err'time U ripping a foo'.. it may not be like that, through other's eyes,
Two minds are different, scheming and spitting to make another cry.
U think U phatter bruh'? All these net wins.. Does it matter cuzz'?
Spit, fall, get up.. Elevate.. That's what a real rapper does.

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Hurr.. I'll just spit.. So I dun' forget... No flippin'..

Okay, Hitman, Challenging me, U just 'lost'.. Oh wait are U a tourist?
I bet he 'looks up' all his rhymes.. That's iigh.. I'll still make U 'the-sorrest'. (Thesaurus)
I don't even remember battling U.. kill? Don't even doubt, cuhz' U'll run man,
It's kinda' funny.. His list of friends can be counted on one hand!
So, I'ma call up his friends after this, and they'll be mad that I ripped ya',
But face it, the only thing deadly about this Hitman J.. is his advatar picture!
He's a foo' U see, and it ain't new to me, when U see this f*ck's repping,
It's like the gay community.. oh wait, like this battle cuhz' I jus' 'wrecked-em'! (Rectum)
Counting the d-riders on here.. Don't deny, look at Eryk, no wonder he's out,
And your skill level ain't even 'remote' and if it was.. it's hidden under the couch.
My 'bars' are 'explosive'... So let's just say, U'll neva' be the 'bomb's escapee',
J..I tried to type at your skill level.. [size=7]but this was the smallest font-they-gave-me![/size]

Self Explanatory.. Dun' get sumfn'.. Ask.
iigh. Gud luck.

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