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Wed 31 May, 2006 07:46 am
Which slogan is better?
1) Development is the top priority.
2) Development leads top prosperity.
3) Development is most promising.
4) Development is the only way.
I vote for the first one. The second one isn't catchy in English, although it is grammatical. The third one is obvious; and the last one is too limiting -- what about growth avter development? Profit? There are other priorities in business; your slogan should indicate that development is the most important.
I'd go with:
Development is better than a poke in the eye with a sharp stick.
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Yes, the best is #1.
#2 doesn't make a whole lot of sense, grammatically, (sorry, Wy!).
#3 would benefit by insertion of "the" between "is" and "most", but implies comparison with something else.
#4 #4 is fine, but rather aggressive.
You're right, Tomkitten. Sorry if I was confusing, oristar!
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Wy - I think we both read #2 exactly as written, but perhaps it should have been "to" not "top". In which case, it makes perfect sense, and although that sense is quite different from #1, it would be fine, depending on the context.
I vote for #1 also....
blacksmithn wrote:I'd go with:
Development is better than a poke in the eye with a sharp stick.
Development - Making 13 year old girls self conscious the world over.
None of them is exactly catchy or memorable. Sorry to say it but it's true. 1 is probably best.
Development--because poverty sucks.
You are welcome, Wy.
Thank you all for replying.