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can you please make this letter look proffessional?

 
 
bubu
 
Reply Fri 13 Jan, 2006 06:17 pm
Hello!

This is a letter to the General Manager of an institute. Can you please modify it?

Dear sir,

I would like to let you know that three training programs on spoken English are already over. The first one was from 19.12.05 to 21.12.05, the second from 02.01.2006 to 03.01.06 and the third from 09.01.06 to 13.01.06.

Would you please release Rs 1500/- [150´10] for the trainer's payment for the above 10 classes.

Thank you
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rhymer
 
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Reply Fri 13 Jan, 2006 07:36 pm
I write to inform you that three training programs on spoken English are now completed.
The first was from 19.12.05 to 21.12.05, the second was from 02.01.2006 to 03.01.06 and the third was from 09.01.06 to 13.01.06.

Will you now please release Rs 1500/- [150´10] to allow trainer payments for the above, which involved 10 classes.

Thank you
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Clary
 
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Reply Mon 16 Jan, 2006 03:54 am
I would say this:

I am writing to let you know that three training programs on spoken English have now been completed. The first one was from 19.12.05 to 21.12.05, the second from 02.01.2006 to 03.01.06 and the third from 09.01.06 to 13.01.06.

Could you please release Rs 1500/- [150´10] for the trainer's payment for the above 10 classes?
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Clary
 
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Reply Mon 16 Jan, 2006 03:59 am
actually I'd say programmes, being British!
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