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Sun 13 Nov, 2005 11:25 am
I work in a school district where the Superintendent assigns writing topics for students. Her September essay topic was "Becoming Most Excellent". She admits that the wording is grammatically incorrect; but it's a motto which she has created. What do you think about this crazy idea of having all students in our district writing on this topic?
I don't know why the superintendent admitted to making a grammatical error because she didn't. "Most" can mean to the greatest extent or to a great extent (very). In the example given it would be the latter. Furthermore, I rather like the motto, but then I'm just an archaic "old coot".
"Excellent" is not a quantity that can be qualified.
You can no more talk of "most excellent" than you can talk of "least excellent".
You either have excellence or imperfection.
Perhaps the superintendent hankers for Madison Avenue?
It's sounds that "Becoming Most Excellent" is wrong. I think I agree.
But then what can replace that?
I thought we were to leave no student behind; how, then, could we have a "most excellent" student?
(I thinks this superintendent has watch "Bill and Ted's Excellent Adventure" one too many times.)
No, I dont think it is wrong, and I think flyboy explained the reason very well. Allow me to elaborate on his point. "Most" can be a degree word, meaning very. It is not always found in the superlative form. So if you can say "very excellent" than you can say "most excellent" as well. This is sort of an archaic form, but I think I've heard it in British English (Brits feel free to correct me). For example, "That boy is most charming." Most modifies charming here in a way that is similar to very or quite.
flyboy804 wrote:Furthermore, I rather like the motto, but then I'm just an archaic "old coot".
... with a most excellent grasp of the workings of language.
Thanks, JTT, your response has made me a "Most Happy Fella".
There is nothing wrong with "Most Excellent".
You are excellent. He is more excellent, but she is most excellent.
The Super Size Spiel sells fast food. I suppose watered down education can be compared to fast food.