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Thu 21 Apr, 2005 06:44 am
Studying too hard can lower students marks
The trouble is, there are many ways to lower students marks. Studying too well can cause person happiness, but not everyone feel the same way like other does. Studying too hard can effect a person health. The more a student tries, the more they suffer. I think it is always true that a student must have self-confidence in order to reduce their low marks. Today's students are suffering for their lower marks, because of studying too hard, reducing modification and negative mind productivity.
Why is studying too hard lower students marks? Because studying is what students do, so suffering is inevitable until they graduate. How is it true that a student suffer? Studying hard is harsh. So studying soft is the opposite, and therefore desirable. Sometimes studying hard can effect person health. The more a student tries, the more they suffer. Effort takes effort, so to make things easy students should take things easy.
Students wouldn't put modification to do well on test, because the fact that they study hard. Sometimes students loose their modification and become easily a failure. Why do many students loose their modification. The truth is that hard study is disappointing because mistakes and struggles occur. In order to escape from the less modification, students should only take the successful path. In addition they have to explore only the things that the students have to know about and learn by making no mistake.
For some students negative mind productivity is sometimes a typical case. Say student start studying and get knowledge unit every minute. Then 15 minute later, as students getting deeply in to the subject, their mind would be rising. In addition the student' mind would be tired. So they will learn very little for every extra minute they studied. Why is mind productivity sometime a negative aspect for a student? The truth is that student getting more and more confused as they advanced in their study. This freaks them out, so they have to go back a few pages and realize that they did not understand. Finally a student studied hard for about 6 hours, and learned the same as if they had studied half an hour. If a student had stopped after 2 hours, they should be more relaxed confident and with more knowledge unit in their own.
Many students are suffering for low marks. Because they study hard, the more they try the more they suffer. The truth is that hardly study can disappoint a student, because mistakes and struggles occur. Sometimes students loose their modification and become more a failure. In order to escape from the less modification , students should take advantages to succeed . In addition students have to explore only the things that a student has to know about and learn by making mistake
I hope for a better result...
thank u all
ajini, I am not certain what you are seeking. Can't you rephrase your question about verbs?
Letty ....this is one of my draft essay.....
i don't know if my verbs are looking okay.But when i read it seems to be horrible i assume...
so i am asking people..to exaplain where and why i have to focus with my grammer.
All right, Ajini, and if I might make a suggestion, see if you can compress your essay just a bit. In other words, make it, perhaps, one small paragraph at a time. That way it is easier to critique.
There u go Letty...
i forgot to format my paragraph
i hope its now much easier for u to critique
All right, dear. Let's not focus on the verbs so much until we understand the purpose of a paragraph.
Model:
First of all, studying too hard can be just as harmful as not studying enough. When a student spends all of his time pouring over books, and does not take a moment to relax and get away from the academic pursuit, his mind can shut down and internalizing information can almost be impossible.
That is your first reason in support of your thesis.
Incidentally, Reformatting your essay made it much easier for YOU to continue in the development for which I have provided a model.
If you want to use that model, your second paragraph should give another reason, understand?
oh great ..thanks...Letty
You're quite welcome, my friend. Good luck in your essay.
Hahaha...retired school teacher....hmm
i am honouring you
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